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schedule
May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, for the love of god! This is a site in which you could do anyg ang and they did NOTHING!?!
schedule
May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
To be honest, I saw the title/description and figured this was just going to be badly-written sex after you'd aged Paco and Jade up a bit; and while I was slightly confused by how old you were trying to make them - the description of Paco noticing Jade's "curves" didn't quite match up with the fact that they seemed like they were still little kids - as aas a cute story. Jade's comebacks were amusing and very much her, and Paco's naive suggestiveness countered it perfectly.