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for Test of the heart.

by englishwitch2003

person ???
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u should do another with dash
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Maybe you could let her seduce Tommy in an empty room in school? Or watch her parents in bed invisible?

Kinda good story so far, even the incest part.
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love you on so,so many levels!
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Continue? Hell, yes continue this story please.
person Clay
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A fine story with a girl who has the power we all dreamed of. Which is rather strange, because I just picked up Peter S. Beagle's "Tasmin" today and the first bit is about girl wishing she was invisible. I'd love to read more. The possibilities are endless.

I especially loved the scene where she's trying to maneuver around people and make her feet sound less audible. I like feet though. :-d

We need more of these stories, DAMNIT!