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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just got this in email, and I just responded to said email. Get the DVD, check out the extras. A true geek would have done so by now. I'm 21 and a pre-law major - I don't make statements without evidence to back them up. Also, check out the Incredibles section of fanfiction.net. Every author there will tell you the same thing. You are neither mean nor bitter, simply uninformed. Hope you understand this after reading the email I sent.
Beyond all that, I do hope to read more soon.
Beyond all that, I do hope to read more soon.
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great as usual. Just wanted to point out that Stratagirl and dynaguy are dead, tho.
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its really good including the new chapter(5). Although i'd like to see dash again you only made him 4 inches so if you do then make him bigger.(you'll cum up with something)
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
all you need is a nude picture of violet to complete the visual story
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please update soon.
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was impressed. I never thought of Violet as a slut. I think it was a good story... except you repeated the same phrases too much. You said "her pussy was begging to be fucked" at least 20 times. You could've used another phrase. But it was very good. You managed to describe the trials and tribulations of a horny teenage girl in search of sex to a 't'. Good job. I'd like to hear more Violet stories from you.
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well. after completing this oddyuesy of hedonism im must say we are a little desipointed.
Some points id like to make, sex wise, they never did anything but pussy and tits, foreplay, then vaginal sex. Noo matter who its with or where it is its still boring. Have anal, gangbangs, Bndage, At least for godsake ass in oral.
Id also like to point out that the phrase "Fuck me t'ill i scream" was over used. We are annoyed by that, it killed our wood, No one kills or wood and lives
Some points id like to make, sex wise, they never did anything but pussy and tits, foreplay, then vaginal sex. Noo matter who its with or where it is its still boring. Have anal, gangbangs, Bndage, At least for godsake ass in oral.
Id also like to point out that the phrase "Fuck me t'ill i scream" was over used. We are annoyed by that, it killed our wood, No one kills or wood and lives
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You've got to continue this! There's no way this should end. Continue it or make a sequel! As a veteran lemon fanfiction reader, there's no way I can let you make as big a faux pas as you did by leaving the reader in a cliff hanging moment. Please, if you can find it in your heart, take my advice.
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey that was a nice story keep up the good work.
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing, a great piece of work.