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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweeeeeeeetnesss! darkness, smut, PLOT, you've got everything here! top notch!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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...wow...that was...incredible...
I love it and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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...wow...that was...incredible...
I love it and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Keep going!
I kinda had a feeling early on that Psychewave would end up being someone beyond what he was, but I had no idea that you were leading Vi down the "dark side". It was an interesting twist, indeed.
Keep up the good work!
James
I kinda had a feeling early on that Psychewave would end up being someone beyond what he was, but I had no idea that you were leading Vi down the "dark side". It was an interesting twist, indeed.
Keep up the good work!
James
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is the greatest incredibles fiction yet!
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A fantastic story, if a little too angsty. But then again thats probably my own relationship trouble speaking :P more more more!
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was SO FREAKING EXCELLENT!!!
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story, please continue. I can't wait for more!
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
super powered person being good......hah. If I had powers i'd be evil. And not in a greedy way either in a kill people for the fun of it kind of sadistic way so ha. Otherwise good story.
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write a chapter or story about dash doing well something to make his dick even bigger than tony's so he can have sex with his sis. I was thinking how and all i could come up with is that he steals something from a lab or something idk you can figure out something please write it?
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I bet Tony is going to be horny and no other girl will give him the prefect fuck like violet did. So he is going to come crawling back begging for her to go out with him again... *giggles* please e-mail me when you update this is like a amazing story that I can't get enough of!!