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This was well written and had an emotional depth rarely found in fanfic.  

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Good chapter but it would have been better if Vanisher had sex with Shifter

I love your story it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.

Am I wrong for trying to over think this cause I swear I have a headache trying to figure out if Tony really is Tony because of this last chapter right here. I mean if i was paying attention in the one before that she was totally devoted to Tony even when Psychewave tried to flirt with her all she was interested in was Tony so why would she be imagining herself giving Psyche head. oh well enough broading on to the next chap

I tell you what---That was fu*cking awesome.

Holy shit! that was incredable rght amount of smut, Yet an amazing plot. Christ on a crutch! writeingis your strong suite.

I went through a lot of emotions when I read this, from Glee to HATRED,from enjoyment to wishing I had never read some of thoes lines(T.M.I. Dash/Helen/Bob(don't want to know you like that!!)And FINALY(About chapter 6)Things got to where they
were suposed to be!
B+ (maby a bit more.)
Oh yeah Vi/Dash WOULD NEVER HAPPEN IN A MILLION YEARS!!!!
HE ANT NO MAN! HES HER BROTHER!!!!~>[

Wow.... This was an amazing fanfiction... i used up all but nine minutes of my 103 minutes on a computer at the library to read it... i just kept me begging for more... the author could be a pro, with their style, and prose. I loved it!

Good story overall...the sex scenes were imaginative, though some of the dialogue was a bit lame. I'd get a beta reader, too, you've got lots of typos. The story in the later chapters was just plain awesome, good going there...but I'm going to go tell the folks that made the Daredevil and Powerpuff Girls movies that you're using their lines. :P
I think a sequel is in order. Shifter breaks Phychewave out of jail, maybe uses a different form for a change? And sex, of course. Lots more sex. I could totally see Dash getting frustrated and threating to tell Vi's boy what she did with him, if she doesn't agree to do it again. Regularly. Or is that just me being evil?

Great no FANTASTIC fan fic best incredibles maybe best over ALL. To bad it has to end.