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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far. I thought I was the only one who visualized this couple. Personally, I'm hoping for Violet to tell Dash so that they can work together on this. I'm also hoping that they come clean to their parents, and eventually the whole family gets in on it (I know, I know; I'm a pervert).
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol if you're disturbed than I'll be disturbed with you!!! I've craved this pairing ever since I saw the movie. xD YAY FOR BROTHER AND SISTERLY LOVE!! I love how you tied in parts of the movie with him talking about the whole "Don't touch my sister" thing. I think that's where I got the idea for them falling in love. Just too cute, you know? Heheh I have a thing for brother/sister love/smut. x3
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Make her have the baby! the story can be drawn out more if you do... besides, I think it would add for some nice Drama ^-^ not to mention I can just imagin Dash's mouth permenitly being stuck hanging open; knowing that he's the one who knocked her up x3 *laughs evily* Another Chappie please!!
o.o I hope my review is heard...
o.o I hope my review is heard...
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good....please continue!
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.... Woah. What's violet's decision?
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I understand its not important but its a nice detail to have just for a mental image . Anyway at least your updating unlike a bunch of other people with good half finished stories. Anyway don't take me too seriously since I'll probobly like it no matter what you do. Although it'd be nice if you add his size in an upcoming chapter(and make him big) but hey thats just me.
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i enjoyed the story so far but i think that she should have to deal with reality that sounds like the best bet with the story plot
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A good story. Well written. I would definately like to see a third chapter where she has to deal with being pregenant by her brother.
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Make her deal with life. Its so much more angsty that way. Oh and great all around story!
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are strange and deeply disturbing...I like you. Nicely written.