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for No One But Me

by Macelf

person Mac-man
schedule November 21, 2020 at 12:00 AM

What if they tell Bob and Hellen, but it turns out they're not as angry about it as they thought they would be, because Dash and Violet are not really related? Let's face it, Violet doesn't look anything like the Parrs, it wouldn't be too far fetched for them to have adopted her from some very close friends, who couldn't take her for some reason.

Dash is certainly their son, he looks like a miniature Bob Parr, with some of Hellen thrown into the mix. Violet doesn't look anything like either one of them, black hair, pale complexion, slender frame, even if you factor in grandparents, there would still be something of Bob and Hellen in her appearance, and there isn't.

The only thing Bob and Hellen might be mad about is the fact that Dash is a minor, and still in highschool, and how irresponsible both of them were for having unprotected sex.

person Anon
schedule October 11, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Hey can I be   a oc in the story

person Anon
schedule October 11, 2018 at 12:00 AM

hi MacElf

I had a idea that Dash had a cousin named Ben Parr 

and Ben & Dash liked Vi

schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please if you ever get the chance please continue this story. It is very good and I look forward to how Violet and Dash overcome their problems.
person Brittany Sambrano
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. Just... Wow. I never even considered this pairing. Tonight I was bored and looking for something to read when I stumbled upon this story. You are my new hero. XD I enjoyed every minute of it. Your spelling, word choice, description, and plot was remarkable. Keep up the good work, and I'm definately looking forward to future chapters.
~Brittany Sambrano
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, really interesting. Do send more.
person Leon Priester
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story your writings are briliant
person Anon
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well made
person derek
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i loved both of these storys there both put together very well and i cant wait for the third chapter. so plz hurry up and write it. make sure its just as good as the other 2.