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by belgarion15

schedule October 1, 2025 at 12:00 AM

i think dah is sexy

schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please please please please please please please please please update this story i am begging you to *gets on hands and knees* please please please please *kisses your feet* please
person jonkon
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you rock keep up teh pimp work
person Anon
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
isnt jack jack a boy?
person lizzie
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was okay, but basically horrible. First, when you say kids, you should spell it kids, not kid's. If you say it kid's, you are basically saying "Kid is" or something the kid has. AND JACK-JACK IS A GIRL!GIRL!GIRL!GIRL!GIRL!GIRL!GIRL!GIRL!GIRL!GIRL! sO, overall, your story fuckin' sucks.
person lizzie
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ended my message too soon. Like i was sayin, Jack-Jack is a girl! right? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! HE IS A BOY! BOY! BOY! BOY! BOY! BOY! BOY! BOY!
person steel ranger
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
didn't you post this on fanfiction.net and got booted????
if it is i think it was wrong of them to do so and am happy you found a place where you can truly express yourself
person Frank
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the story is great but how about the one when elastigirl when traped between the two door and if she was raped
person DariusFF
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoo! I love how you keep the fic story oriented and not so dirty... Its cool that you make violet so manipulative and bob so heroic/nice... one request can you make bob and helens relationship closer/sweeter? anyways... AWESOME! GREAT! SWEET! ... INCREDIBLE!! lol

ps. a question will there ever be a 3-some? (mff) and hardcore images?
person Jake.
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME STORY! more more more!!!