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Awesome writing! Please continue, I think you've got a compelling story.

wow...Victor's life has gotten quite complicated hasn't he?
Please write more, find that inspiration and don't let it go.
I've misplaced mine after the third funeral in four months.
Respectfully yours:
AntwerpsRule

I have so many lines in here that I like, but my memory is really bad so all I can really, definitely compliment you on is the one about the world crashing down, or Victor crashing down. The visuals along with the tight suspense and emotions are amazing. I wish I could better tell you how engaging this is and I think it's because Victor is so unpredictable at this point. I like the characterization of Victoria too. She was so prim and sane and predictable; great contrast. I would love for you to get motivation and keep up the fic. You could take it anywhere and at the same time each chapter ends so well that it could stand on its own.

God, that's good stuff. I'd be a liar to say that wasn't hot and sick but hot. You have (by far) some of the best adult writing I've ever seen (there's some shit writing out there). Did I mention how hot that was? And why that's so wrong? <3 <3 <3

So good! That was brilliant! I think you should leave it at that though, and not make it any longer. Has more impact that way.

Good to see another fic here...

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what did I just read?

Wow...in all honesty, I'm gonna have nightmares for a few days. That took a lot of courage to write. I HATE one shot smut fics, but since you left most of the detail out of it, I'll live...this is sick, twisted, disturbing. I like. There is no way I would be able to write something like this.
I'm going to crawl into a dark corner and try to get over the downright creepy feeling this gave me.
Mr. Happy Face however wants your home address, I suggest you don't give it to him.

*blinks* that was interesting....I wonder can Emily feel what's happening to her body???

this is definately a new twist on Victor....a sick....twist....BUT I LIKE IT!!!!

I hope this isn't a one-shot....

there's sooooo much potential!

I'll check back for updates....after all it shouldn't be too hard to find, there aren't that many Corpse Bride fanfics after all on this site.

Liz

There is so much I can see here, and I don't know if this is a one shot or not, but I hope not...Pleeeease. I really think you can develop this really warped Victor. I can see his two live growing and becoming very complex and it getting very hard for him to keep them from ever touching. A real tragedy though, this is so sick, but I'm so compelled to keep reading as I still feel sympathy for Victor. Really nice hook, you took major risks here that I never could, and I can't wait to see where this might go.