rate_review Reviews

I enjoyed the story, thought it was nicely done. I would like to point out, though, that Corpse Bride seems to be set in the Victorian era. Though early forms of the bra were around at the time, they were not like today's bras, nor were they as widely used as the corset. Aside from that small detail, the story was very good.

On one hand...it's great to see another fic here, and althought I hate the idea of Victor/Victoria...it's kind of refreshing to see a different point of view. Even thought there's really not too much here, there's something. You mentioned in the summary (or at least hinted) that your going to attempt Warm and Fuzzy feeling too... always fun.

On the other hand... (gives the finger)
Mabey it's just because I HATE pointless smutt fics, or that i hate it when people have practly nothing but tags in their summaries. (your score was 16 tags...)
Or that I hate the parring idea...in paticular your idea of Victor/Victoria/Emily...How in the hell did you think that one up?
But people are reading this thing (even if no one is voting) so you kinda set yourself up to continuing this, I'm not gonna tell you not to, just don't expect me to be polite twoards you in the near future.
Just some advice...learn female anatomy, and for the love of all thats left in this world, explain why you decided not to make Victoria a virgin.

Don't get me wrong though...it took guts to write this, kudos for that if not for anything else

Victoria is a stupid bitch cunt who needs to die in a horrible horrible horrible way at the hands of Mr. Happy Face and if Victor doesn’t pick Emily who not only has a better personality but also a better body even with the missing skin my Samurai flesh eating pandas will be very angry and they are not nice to be around when thier in bad moods.
With love; Imasuky Lomae

Learn female anatomy please. The clit isn't something you can insert things into. That's the vagina.