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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If you ask me
You did a really good job on this
Although a part of me wishes that it was a bit more detailed
Still good though
But I cant help but wonder why there isnt any more of these pairings on this site
You did a really good job on this
Although a part of me wishes that it was a bit more detailed
Still good though
But I cant help but wonder why there isnt any more of these pairings on this site
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More? Please.
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes, please, add another chapter! there were one or two things that in the first chapter that i think could've been worded and executed better, i adored the second chapter. cute for their first time, erotically forbidden for emily's cold flesh, shivering with ectasy for victor's succumbing to his desires, and sweet warmth for emily being able to feel and be free. loved the last bit with the repetition. lovely job. ^_^ i hope you do add some more, whether it be another one-shot type of chapter before the wedding, or maybe some events after the wedding (if you decided to have victor and emily be together).
much love and writer's wishes,
~*kitty*~
much love and writer's wishes,
~*kitty*~
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Morbidly good smut!
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story, please post your next chapter as soon as you are able to
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's good. please continue if your muse will let you.
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was good while it lasted. if you are going 2 write another chapter, PLEASE make it longer and in better detail. Thnx!
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's good, chapters could be longer....but I like it, it has promises of things that can happen later on...please continue,
Liz
Liz
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow thats so deep and sweet but at times funny. I love it
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was adorable. Verysweet