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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Do another chapter please
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For a first story, you're doing rather good. Keep up the good work.
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, there was incest but still sexy and hot. I'd love it if you continued this!
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's good. Continue.
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY GOOD! Please continue the story.
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh..... that's a strange story. Whatever......
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm not one for insest, but you did a good job with writing it. There were a few spelling mistakes though. The one I can remember off the top of my head is this "he nippled her nipple". So, you might want to fix it. Aside from that, you should continue. :)
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to finish this!
Ruby Cold
Ruby Cold
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really hot but leave out the word 'withered' next time it's not sexy
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
id like to see them get caught in suprise by aladdin or something then a three-some. that would be hot