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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really liked your fic! please make more chapters to it. Thanks for writing a good fic!
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot! more please
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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please finish! You are a very good story teller.
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it...the only advice I have is to add more of what she feels...
Please continue to write you are very good...and so is your story.
Please continue to write you are very good...and so is your story.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this. Its very good, and even though the idea of father/ daughter incest is a bit strange, its a huge turn on. Thanks for your time!
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter and I think you should continue writing this story.
Carly x.
Carly x.
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
[“What do I have to do?” She asked, wanting to have an organism so bad.]
...She wanted to have an organism? Well, at least it's an amusing typo... It worries me that no one has pointed this out before.
...She wanted to have an organism? Well, at least it's an amusing typo... It worries me that no one has pointed this out before.
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
continue!!!!!!!!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue what about more of it.
kari
kari