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for One Night Alone

by PirateMistressBlaire

person chedorii
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this! Very, very nice for your first fic. The detail was great, and I really like it when I can find a good story that includes incest, great job! Please write more :D
person dgsnape
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
continue please?
person Jags
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was very hot please continue
person Rezny
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is very good for your first fic. The descriptiveness and detail was quite amazing; it definitely got me interested! Very good overall (although I just can't for the life of me imagine the Sultan being like that o_o;;).
person Lolths Champion
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A good start. What say you continue it, hey?
person guess
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
u had alot more to this story what happened to it?!?! if u took it down could u please put it back up
person Kris
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice a lovely start to a good story
person carabella
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is pretty good, its definitely interesting, so yea, please continue!
person Teania
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
While i am not a big fan of incest (unless it's Sesshomaru and Inuyasha) this fic so far is... okay. I've never really thought that the short sultan could have that big of a...you know what...anyways, that makes it alittle too unrealistic. But other than that, it's a pretty good fic and I think i'd like to see more.

But what would make it fun? have Aladdin walk in next chapter...(i have a sick mind, i know)

-te te
person Crystal Magic
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not really sure what to say, but I like it!