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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story but, it was a bit short.
Names for pets can be done to where they match the pets personality rather than their sex to those who didn't know that.
I did notice some spelling mistakes sorry, but I thought you may want to know.
Names for pets can be done to where they match the pets personality rather than their sex to those who didn't know that.
I did notice some spelling mistakes sorry, but I thought you may want to know.
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Do everyone a favor and never write again.-_-;;
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dont you think a 13 year old girl is a bit young to have a 10 inch dick in her, it was also painfully short.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
uuuhhhh, no, tiger dicks have outward-facing barbs(spines) along the length, so, that would have been a LOT more painful
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
short and a bit badly spelled but it was good. rajah actually is a male. who would give a female tiger the name of a royal male ruler? (cause thats wat a rajah is) but hey, that is up for debate.
good job! ^-^
good job! ^-^
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December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm did you noe that a tiger's penis has like spine/spikes??
just thought i'd share that cool fact XD
great job with the fic
just thought i'd share that cool fact XD
great job with the fic
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was written ok and you get an extra + sign for the beastiality, this site lacks it heavily.
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should work on your spelling and the story itself is very short. Even for a PWP there should be more detail and a bit more foreplay. I did once write this storyline myself but I destroyed it years ago. Anyhow, you have a good idea going with this.
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was good. R u planning on updating?
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While this fic was very short, it was also very out-of-character for both Jasmine and her pet tiger. Why does she automatically assume upon seeing his penis that she is his mate? Seriously...
The spelling, while not atrocious, was poor, as was the sentence structure and verb tense. The description wasn't bad, but the simplistic nature of it all was.
The spelling, while not atrocious, was poor, as was the sentence structure and verb tense. The description wasn't bad, but the simplistic nature of it all was.