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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the thing about this story is that it seems realistic- things like this actually happen in real life. nice combo. are you going to update?
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January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This actually was a lot better than I expected. Keep writing and you'll become a good writer. I really enjoyed this, but there were places you could improve (already said in other reviews though, so I won't go over it again). I liked this alot!!
And
Jafar = Sex.
And
Jafar = Sex.
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October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ub should do a second chapter
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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
bastard do the world a favor and never NEVER write again. How would you like it if something like this happened to you?
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE ONE SICK MOTHER FUCKING ASSHOLE! HOW YOU CAN ENJOY SOMETHING LIKE THIS IS BEYOND ME.
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I agree with the person who posted under "yuck." Rape is terrible. www.n.orn.org
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! Thank you! Those other two were sorry! This one was good! I got a charge.....I loved it! I hope he'll contuine....in the next chapter. There will be another chapter.....I don't care....No, I do! Pleaze Pleaz Pleaz contuine!
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, in all a good first chapter. You had a lot of good drama and detail. A very realistic take on her fathers responce to her as well.
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November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good story! it made me come. where's more?
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November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was disguisting. it's scary how people can enjoy to write about such a think as raping. sick, very sick. didn't like it at all.