rate_review Reviews

Needs more spacing. Plot was believeable, flow was good. Harsh subject. Still it was an interesting plot idea. You should really consider doing some more on this. It would help flush out the plot and give the story more depth.

pretty good.

I agree with Soph.

If you don’t like the subject DON’T READ IT!!!

Better than the 500 other rape stories on here.-_-;;

Ok reading all the other reviews, i don't think it's fair to use that language towards this authort and insult her. After all its *her* fanfic and you read the summary, and you knew it was going to be a rape, so if your sensitive about these things then do the author a favour and don't read it then. This is Adult fanfic, for mature adults who don't just go round calling people "mother fuckers" just becuase they didn't like what they read. Don't get me wrong, I'm not saying i absolutely enjoy rape whatever, but seems to me this one is getting more flames because Jasmin is more of an inncoent cartoon character. I've read lots of rapes here, doesn't seem to get the same response.

But yeah i think the author deserves some credit here, you wrote it well, theres still room for improvment, but still you captured Jasmins emotions well.

Err....ouch. That sounded painful.

More more more!

Wow...that was *really* bad...

how sad it makes me cry

Intresting use of language...wouldn't her tiger rip the dick to pieces if he was there?

"and for unknown reasons, she began to sob, "

unknown reasons? She's being raped/molested!

work on this.