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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it... It was good but not great, it could have used a little more dialoge.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
jasmine <3
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that made me excited. Great story. A few spelling mistakes, but overall very well written.
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty good
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was sext
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November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Let me get this straight... they are married, this is apparently after their wedding night, yet they have never made love before this point? What are you, twelve? That's rediculous. Don't write smut until you're old enough to know how it goes.
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ha ha!!! That was Cute!
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHA. Treasure Chest...
HAHAHA
HAHAHA
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
kawaii...
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why does everybody like thie fourplay stuff? I mean not enough sex. No thrusting, no moaning, no cumming.....that's the best part. Sucking each other's parts is tired. And i'm bored. I didn't get a charge! *pouts*