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Aww, poor Cyclonus and Ultra Magnus; suffering the wrath of furfags. Ha, kidding, kinda. Rape in itself is terrible but I can't imagine what could be worse; suffering through a painful rape or being forced to feel pleasure during a rape and end up utterly disgusted with yourself.

Well, at least they have each other, right?

If I ever needed any more reason to hate the Quintessons, this story gives me plenty of them.

I enjoy how murderous Cyclonus' thoughts are in this chapter (though I suppose that's how he's been written throughout the entire story). He's such an adorable psycho bunny.

Another great chapter. Part of this story that muses me is picturing some bored Quins being all, "Hey, lets get these two bots raped until they love each other!" "LULZ GREAT IDEA STEVE!" Man those guys need to get cable. XD

I knew there would be tentacle rape. I just KNEW it.

Well done chapter. You made me feel really bad for Ultra Magnus. You know, I bet a lot of us dirty Transformers fans have probably fantasized about being intimate with a Transformer, but I wonder how many stop to consider how the mechs would feel about the situation. I like how you compared a mech having sex with an organic to be equivalent to a person having sex with an animal. I guess organics must seem pretty beastial and barbaric in the eyes of an advanced robot race.

Someone as a crush on Cyclonus... Oooooh...

Cyclonus and Ultra Magnus are so going to end up fucking. I knew this as soon as I started reading, of course, but somehow it's still so good!

Awww, poor Ultra Magnus and Cyclonus! Rape itself is bad enough, but being touched by those nasty sharkicons? Really the only thing worse would be if they got tentacle-raped by the quintessons. Ugh.

...I didn't think it was possible, but you made me like Cyclonus and Ultra Magnus together as a pairing. Sure, technically those two haven't actually done anything with each other technically, but...

Really, there needs to be more stories with Cyclonus. He's an adorable little bunny bot. Honest.

Yes, you may use the idea. Thanks for asking permission, but it was unnecessary :3

Thank you for the permission. Unlike some authors, I ALWAYS ask permission to even use one unique 'device' of another author's - before I publish the chapter that I used it in. And I also ALWAYS put a link at the top of that chapter back to the work/author that I got the idea for. It is the original author who deserves full credit for their original ideas.

BTW, you're 'device' is incorporated into chapter 3. I hope you enjoy what it shall be used for.

Oooh, lovely... JUST the sort of thing I like. And well written, too.

I'm biting my nails over this one. o.o Wondering how they'll fair in this experiment. *waits for the next chapter*

I like torture. Ergo I like this fanfic. Although it's not the sort of thing I'd write myself, I'm looking forward to stages three to five.

As for your previous 'review' in Becoming Mama Bear, you're basically asking me to replace two of your chapters of Bumblebee being raped with two of my chapters of Bumblebee being raped. I'd like you to cut a fellow writer a break-

Aw, hell with it. I'll write my own two chapters, provided you accept that it's STILL gonna be pretty similar to yours what with Bumblebee STILL being a fucktoy for the entire base. And give me a couple of weeks to write those chapters. Sorry I didn't bother before, but I was busy, and then I forgot about it.