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by mehmeh

person Damon Longshadow
schedule September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello guys( or girls, maybe..?) doesn´t really matter, does it- because this story is basically written from the omniscent perspective of one or two authors who know quite a bit about the technicalities of giant alien mechanoids` ways of "interfacing"( lovely, is that an original, or did you devise it? Absolutely plausible. And also a lot of fun to read, because it´s well written, has more depth than in any of the usual rather dull and/or meager teenage story combinations( as seen in the movies- which wasn´t too bad, but presented too prominent a focus on the humans for my taste)- and your perspective is considerably darker than most other Transformer-ff-spinoffs that I could find in the entire net. I am not too familiar with G1, but that´s not a must to get thru this story here, because it relates expertly the underlying emotional turmoil of your prime (ahem, excuse the pun) "suspects"- great character rendering, which makes them very interesting- even megalomaniac Megatron isn´t too onedimensional either. Keep going!! Damn good.
person NightShade
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yaaaay i love this story!! keep it up pleeease!!
person shozurei
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was amazing! How'd you learn to write fight scenes like that? I hope Rumble will be ok.
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please update crappy predicament
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, soundwave & prime...and nasty prime at that! Curious to see what happens when soundwave is found out