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October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay first off: THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE CHAPTER!! *MILLIONS OF HEARTS* Okay now that I am done abusing the caps lock; I have to say I randomly came online to check up on a couple of stories- since I have been busy with school and work i haven't had much time to come online. And what do i get to see? ANOTHER CHAPTER! I was bouncing off the walls!
XD the laptop on my lap hit the floor cause i suddenly jumped up and started to dance around like a loony fangirl ^^; Points of love: Scream is not longer thinking Glock is Tron yay ^^ <3333 *hearts* that is so great, and it was so well written! And while I know Glock has his reasons, helping Opie like he is, i Love seeing Opie gaining confidence!
And i know it will bite them in the aft later having Glock teaching Opie so much, I still think it might be a good thing in the end! Opie replacing Charge as the ground commander- it will cause a lot of drama and tension but it would be interesting to see none the less. And as for Jag, he is still my number one favorite! He even goes pede to pede against Charge! ^_^
I was in awe the whole time i was reading this chapter. It just holds so much, and thickens the plot! I am so hooked! I already have gone back and re-read all of the first book(story) and am now going back to read the second part. I am just so in love with this plot bunny! Seeing just how much it has grown and twisted and turned, I have enjoyed reading it, and even rereading it over and over again. Now i just wished I had more time to read and enjoy it!
Final note: Again I thank you very much for all of your time you have spent thinking and working on these chapters, I am one of the many who have greatly enjoyed reading your work, and I cant wait for more ^^ have a good day! ~Trely
XD the laptop on my lap hit the floor cause i suddenly jumped up and started to dance around like a loony fangirl ^^; Points of love: Scream is not longer thinking Glock is Tron yay ^^ <3333 *hearts* that is so great, and it was so well written! And while I know Glock has his reasons, helping Opie like he is, i Love seeing Opie gaining confidence!
And i know it will bite them in the aft later having Glock teaching Opie so much, I still think it might be a good thing in the end! Opie replacing Charge as the ground commander- it will cause a lot of drama and tension but it would be interesting to see none the less. And as for Jag, he is still my number one favorite! He even goes pede to pede against Charge! ^_^
I was in awe the whole time i was reading this chapter. It just holds so much, and thickens the plot! I am so hooked! I already have gone back and re-read all of the first book(story) and am now going back to read the second part. I am just so in love with this plot bunny! Seeing just how much it has grown and twisted and turned, I have enjoyed reading it, and even rereading it over and over again. Now i just wished I had more time to read and enjoy it!
Final note: Again I thank you very much for all of your time you have spent thinking and working on these chapters, I am one of the many who have greatly enjoyed reading your work, and I cant wait for more ^^ have a good day! ~Trely
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome awesome chapter~ I love how you write Dante. :3~ I really hope to get my next chapter posted soon. The whole Charge and Opie drama is interesting. Scream should just be able to get every bot he wants and be a happy cluster fuck family. >:3
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October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THANK GOD AND PRIMUS YOU ARE BACK!!! I AM SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HAPPY!! I am all for you continuing THIS STORY and NOT the fanfiction ones!!(even though I am dying to know what happens in the sequel to Beauty Within) So, please, please, please, please, PAHLEEESE WORK ON THIS STORY!!!
I LOVED and ADORED this chappie!! I can NOT wait to see where you have this go!! I would like to see SOMEWHERE down the line, Charge and Opie if not friends, at least respect each other!! I am proud of Scream in this chappie, too!! She/he made epic steps forward in his/her healing!! The way you presented that, too, was fantastic!! Very good job!! I love Dante, too! He seems like he is just what Glock needs!
So, all in all, this is an EXCELLENT chapter and I look forward to the next one(please let it be sooner rather then later!!) Keep up the GREAT work. Oh, I would love to chat with you on MSN or Yahoo-if you ever find the time. Just email me for either ID and I will be glad to give it to ya!! Bye for now!!
Transform and Roll Out!!
Cross_fire1205@yahoo.com aka
Jaime
I LOVED and ADORED this chappie!! I can NOT wait to see where you have this go!! I would like to see SOMEWHERE down the line, Charge and Opie if not friends, at least respect each other!! I am proud of Scream in this chappie, too!! She/he made epic steps forward in his/her healing!! The way you presented that, too, was fantastic!! Very good job!! I love Dante, too! He seems like he is just what Glock needs!
So, all in all, this is an EXCELLENT chapter and I look forward to the next one(please let it be sooner rather then later!!) Keep up the GREAT work. Oh, I would love to chat with you on MSN or Yahoo-if you ever find the time. Just email me for either ID and I will be glad to give it to ya!! Bye for now!!
Transform and Roll Out!!
Cross_fire1205@yahoo.com aka
Jaime
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October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hell yeah! But I hate cliffhangers!
I love the tension between Charge and Opie. I hope they can work things out, though! I really do like Charge, I so badly want him to be the perfect leader, haha. Glock's influence on Opie is kind of creepy, but I love it, it totally works. I must admit, I got a little teary-eyed when Glock shook Scream's hand!
Good luck with the next chapter! I can't wait to keep reading!
I love the tension between Charge and Opie. I hope they can work things out, though! I really do like Charge, I so badly want him to be the perfect leader, haha. Glock's influence on Opie is kind of creepy, but I love it, it totally works. I must admit, I got a little teary-eyed when Glock shook Scream's hand!
Good luck with the next chapter! I can't wait to keep reading!
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October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I spent the last few weeks reading the other Market Commodity stories in my spare time, and I absolutely love the direction you've taken this!
I have to say, I'm really happy that you brought Scream and Jag somewhat back together. I actually got really giddy reading those chapters. I was so sad when they split up, I hope everything works out okay for them!
You do a really great job introducing new characters and developing older ones. I was worried that I wouldn't be able to keep track of all the new clones, but there is a really good balance of new and old. I'm so excited that you're including a Megatron clone!
I have to say, I'm really happy that you brought Scream and Jag somewhat back together. I actually got really giddy reading those chapters. I was so sad when they split up, I hope everything works out okay for them!
You do a really great job introducing new characters and developing older ones. I was worried that I wouldn't be able to keep track of all the new clones, but there is a really good balance of new and old. I'm so excited that you're including a Megatron clone!
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October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVE ^^ absolute love! You have no idea how many times i was 'awwing' during this chapter ^_^ it is just so sweet it makes me want to huggle Opie to glitches! Thank you for the chapter
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAY! I so wanted Jag and Scream to start getting back together. ;_; And the whole man love triangles going on. ;-; FFFF I need to write so much too, I've been super busy with work and life. It should be calming down soon though. I promise!
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August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Screams and bounces up and down* I am so so so so so so so so so screaming over this chapter *Billions of hearts fluttering around!* I am so hyper and i loved this chapter so much! it was worth the wait SO worth it! you have no idea! I was about to go to sleep after reading the whole first story then i checked up on your profile and BOOM! there was an update to this story! and i screamed, in rl, i screamed out loud as Daniel suggested the three some! I am glad no one was home! i would have woke everyone up! Sorry if im rambling! I cant help it i am so hyper and i cant wait till you get free time to wrote more~ GL with work dont get too stressed out! I can understand the work thing, ugh i hate my work but we all have to be adults and deal with it..sadly~ anyway thankyou so VERY VERY much for this chapter is has made my night! And i wont me able to sleep tonight i am so hyper!
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July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Waves* Im not dead! Just stuck in Hawaii with family for awhile. Anyway i love you Sharon! you put the idea in his head about Jag taking care of both of them. *fluttering hearts* And i have to say thank you so much for the chapter! I cant wait to see how those three will end up ^__^
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July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*** AoM6 ***
Awwwwh ;-; I missed the Jag x Scream relationship. ;-; Also, nice to see Shanon doing her thing. :3 She's my fav human character of course.
Awwwwh ;-; I missed the Jag x Scream relationship. ;-; Also, nice to see Shanon doing her thing. :3 She's my fav human character of course.