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Glock is entirely too awesome. he should not be so perfectly manipulative yet unevil. Hell, by the time that anybody (including Opie) realizes what he's doing it's going to be too late to stop him. I'm really mad that everyone got so pissed at Glock at first, he did ask Wheelie's age to make sure first, otherwise he coulda just did his thing and no one would have been able to stop him. Now the question is, since Glock is slowly turning the unit into his own personal crew, will he still need Opie? Opie is his partner, but will he eventually drop him and just be leader? Also, I kinda really wanna know what happens during the poker nights? And I wonder why that dream started teh memory echoes.... I'm glad you wrote this chapter.

NO NO NO NO NO! *Cries* How could you? Killing OP is the meanest thing ever. *cries more* but then it grips the heart, twists it and makes the reader think what now because I think everyone wished that Autobots would come and save the day.
It's great to see another update on your story.

Nice chapter! Very interesting, and completely NOT what I was expecting (which is a good thing!) But I would like to know... why aren't there any Dinobot clones?!? I would love-love-love it if a Grimlock-clone happened to be found. And I would be full of even more joy if a Sound-wave clone showed up (wait... didn't one show up?)
And I hope your wrists stop bothering you so much... *sends healing thoughts your way*

I'm loving this fic, but would like to view to more Bumblebee ^ ^
I loved the cap 15 and can not wait for the next ^ ^

(sorry my bad inglish)

First I just need to say how amazed I am that you were able to write when it physically hurt you and spoke about it like it was something trivial. Wow, you are a real writer to write through pain just for fun and a few words of normal people like me. You deserve some sort of award. The chapter kind of threw me for a second with Opie's trance especially since it started with Glock and Inferno basically jumping him. Threw me for a loop, especially since I was all 'isn't he Jag's now???' But I love what you did after that, explained a lot about the actual Optimus's view. I'm glad that he got to see the clones together like that... Since Optimus died... who else did? What happened to Earth II? What's going on with Tron and Flashback? What about Steel, Groove, and the conquest of Grammy? Has Sharon made any progress in getting Bond back into more of a G1 Skywarp clone than the Animated one? Just a few questions I had atleast. I'm so glad you got this chapter out so quickly, but take a few days and give your hands a chance to rest. Maybe it won't hurt so badly... Until next chapter.

Hellen...

Your writing style is reminiscent of an older time - picturesc in its emotion. For a second language - you're doing well for your first try. Next time email it to me at anathematransient@yahoo.com first - and I'll fix the formatting/paragraph errors before you publish it.

Can't wait to see what you do with the wandering Blur clone. I assume he's sparked since he had humans that were emotionally connected to him. So he won't get infected with the Decepticon virus.

Hey!

I'm not sure if you are still visiting here, reading reviews and so on but I just want to tell you how riveting is your whole world of Market comodity. For the last few days I couldn't stop reading and I couldn't stop myslef from falling in love with Scream and his merry band.
It's amazing how deep and threedimensional you made almost every character in here, how you took the old mechs and reashaped them into those individuals.
There were moments I loled so hard my hubby was grumbling about me being insane and there were moment I cried because the emotions and feelings in your story are almost palapable.
You turned the light and porny story into so much more. You, as an author, are like an eve spark yourself, you gave them life.

Wish you keep writing this. Oh and I'm reduced to total squeeee with some of the cloes' memory echos... I'd never thought I'd love Prime/Screamer so much, and I'm still tempted to write something for Market Comodity 1.

Oh wow, I hope you feel better soon! Take as much time as you need, don't want you to force yourself, have fun with the writing (its most fun to read that way as well). I must say that I absolutely loved this chapter, it was perfect. I wasn't sure if Beachcomber and Rumble had continued their thing since the first time, but this made it perfectly clear! I must admit, I find their relationship as fascinating as Jag Opie and Scream's. As for those two, I'm glad things seem to be looking on the up for them. I do wonder, though, will Scream find out about 'that' night? How will he react? And much along the same vein, if the revival of Jamie works, what would happen if he didn't forget? If the disappointment of Dante having an Oilslick meta was imprinted on his spark? Would he tell Glock? If so how would Glock react? Would he even believe him, cuz despite the fact that he's off kilter for the clone he's supposed to be, sparked clones often are different from the mechs and there are times where he does act like a true Starscream clone. Once Charge gets over the shock, how will he react to Opie's new confidence? Will Storm actually be happy that Torie's pregnant (once she actually is...)? What would happen if they found a clone of Rumble and Frenzy? (a lot of the others are addressed, and we know how Beachcomber reacts to the clones of him, but how would Rumble? Especially since more likely than not there would be one of his twin too?) What is up with the infected clones? if Tron's group finds an unsparked autobot clone do they make it a slave anyway? What happens if their was more than one, do they fight to see which is the 'real' mech? And this is a question about waaaaaaaaaaaaaay in the future but what happens when the planet is okay again? What happens when the Autobots come back with the rest of the humans? Will the Decepticons come back too? How will they react to the clones and the way they've gotten together? Will they look at certain mechs differently Will the clones tell the mechs what memory echos they had? (Like if Jag told Prowl about what happened with Scream and about the memory echoes, would he look at Starscream differently?) I guess I just wonder what the effect on the Autobot Decepticon war would be if everyone knew everything. What memory echoes does Glock have? Was it that Megatron really actually liked Starscream but refused to just be used by him so decided to just possess his body instead but madly jealous of Optimus made up some crazy excuse to start a war so he could kill him? Was it that he just wanted Optimus under him as well? Some pretty crazy theories, but they were the first that came to mind. It's a long review and I just threw a novel's worth of questions at you so i'll quit while I'm ahead. Sorry I threw so much at you at once, its just good stories get me to thinking and this whole series is great and the more I read it, the more questions I have. I'll probably have even more next chapter. I know you probably won't be able to answer the questions (if any at all) but i just had to write them down and a review is the best place. I can't tell you just how much I loved this chapter, and that I hope you feel better soon. See you next time!

AMAZING chapter! I was psyched out of my mind when I saw the update. I love your description of the battle. That was so sad about Darren--but also a really great twist. Opie seriously needs to get it together. And Jag is awesome. Can't wait for more!

First off: WOW!!! so much happened! And I still have tears in my eyes from Darren's death! He will be very much so missed, and the baby is so cute! ^_^ just cant believe all of the drama is makes things so much better. But I feel so terrible for Opie TT__TT he is going back into the meta set he had when he was taken from Tron T__T And I am very very happy that Jag isn't trying to use this to his advantage to get Opie out of the way so he can have Scream to himself, he is the most perfect Prowl clone! *hearts* As for Glock, i am still very very worried about if he will in the end just take advantage of Opie then drop him and like him take the blame for something. Anyway, thankyou very much for the long chapter! It was greatly loved! ^_^