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for Optimus Prime's Hobby

by sefiru

schedule March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was truly priceless. Thank you for sharing.
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol I love it. This one would have been good for April fools day :)
person Meli Christophorous
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! can't breath! too funny! *breaks down into another fit of laughter* i was banging on the keyboard over this. cause, seriously, who knew he had it in him? not me....ja ne. Meli-chan.
person Raholea
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*blinks*
omg, sefiru-san, that was.... unexpected
and funny in the oddest of ways.
Optimus Prime... KNITTING?????

now... i wonder how a nice metal blanket for a birthday would be like... or if that would be more like, a tarp moment? lol. another good one for the haul.
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You could have added several more pages of the Autobot's theorizing and imagining.. Ending with them ALL gathered at the door... More suspense.. More curiosity build up for us readers...

But the end? All I can say is:

HE... HE... HE.. HEHAHEHAHE.. HE... HE... HE - HE - HE... GASP!!! HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE..... GASP!!!! HEHAHEHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!