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April 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really good story! one of the best, and a rar pairing to boot :D i like the originality of prowl's origins, and his sly maneuvering of prime to get what he wants is priceless. XD can we expect an update?
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January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay! XD i read your other OP/P story and quickly ran over here! Awesome idea. i just love prowl's willingness to serve OP, and Optimus' cluelessness. :D Please update soon!
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April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Prowl is evil and completely oblivious by this point XD Poor Optimus it was all he could do to resist. He he he. I am very interested to see how he turns the tables on him. Still loving this story ^__^
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April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, love the cute plotting. Also, very naughty of Prime to look at lil wet prowl, curious to see how he'"turns the tables"...
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March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice intro to the twins ^_^ And it's good to see that Optimus is thinking about Prowl too he he. Loving the tactics at work in this one!
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March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Tee he he Prowl keeps that side well hidden doesn't he? ^___~
Nice chapter, I love how his tactical brain is showing through and he's already wiping the floor with the others at the game.
You know I think he is kinda based on Spock. Just throw in a raised brow and a 'fascinating' and you're there :D Looking forward to more!!
Nice chapter, I love how his tactical brain is showing through and he's already wiping the floor with the others at the game.
You know I think he is kinda based on Spock. Just throw in a raised brow and a 'fascinating' and you're there :D Looking forward to more!!
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March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay update!!
I like how Prowl is processing everything and he's tactical logical mind is already showing through. I am also wondering what these emotion tags are. Looking forward to the next chapter!! ^^
I like how Prowl is processing everything and he's tactical logical mind is already showing through. I am also wondering what these emotion tags are. Looking forward to the next chapter!! ^^
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February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay update! Question though; how did Prowl know about dial if he isn't even aware of who he is? Was it just something triggered upon seeing Mirage or did I miss something?
Great chapter I like the reasons for naming him Prowl well thought out and is keeping me wanting more ^___^
Great chapter I like the reasons for naming him Prowl well thought out and is keeping me wanting more ^___^
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February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aha been waiting for this fic ^_^ looking forward to more. Nice start. I love that you write my OTP OP/P XD
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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
pretty good so far!