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for Shattered Glass - Perdition

by GabrielC

schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOooo! I want to see a 'good' Megatron! (and a little smut with the 'good' Thundercracker would also be sweet too!)
schedule May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Keep going! It's getting better and better!
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please finish this fic. It is so good that it draws the reader in and has us coming back each week to see if there has been an update. I don't know why readers have become so stingy in leaving even the shortest of reviews as of late (yeah guys - we authors appreciate even the review of 'keep on writing'... three little words and five seconds of time mean a lot to a writer. Give us incentive to spend another 1-5 hours in writing another chapter for your reading pleasure!)

Ok, off my high horse... I've been a little lazy on the reviews myself... so here goes..

I love the cliffhangers of these last two chapters. Your lead-in to them has been masterful. Somehow I expect the 'tall mech' that walks in on TC,SW, BB and Sun - is Skyfire. Maybe he realizes that the Scream from this other dimension would indeed be his perfect sparkmate? You know, since this SS is evil too. I think he would have second thoughts. Maybe decide to follow this new SS to a dimension that they could be a pair in. Perhaps he's sick of evil Prowl's heavy handedness. Perhaps he actually helps them rescue the SS that he now desires. Then they run like hell...
schedule March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hate cliffhangers.... Hate them and love them at the same time! Please continue soon!
schedule March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is actually a very good story! I'm surprised at so few views and even less reviews. Sigh, seems that it how it is on AFF as of late... Sad, since authors want feedback or we wouldn't post stories..
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Evil Autobots - good Decepticons... Seen this idea before, but it's always interesting... Hmmmmmm, 3 captured Seekers + 3 stranded 'good' Autobots who will need to get to Megatron in order to get home... I'm seeing the future plot here...