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February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow. I can hardly wait to read the next fanfic after this!
This has been both exciting and suspenseful. And smutty. :-p
I'll be waiting to read more of it! :-)
This has been both exciting and suspenseful. And smutty. :-p
I'll be waiting to read more of it! :-)
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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter!! I am on pins and needles waiting to find out what happens to everyone next!! I wanna know Prowls reaction to it all and poor Jazz-how he is able to deal with Ironhide and vice-versa!! This chapter really draws you in, and makes you interested. Keep up the good work and update sooooooon!! Pahleese!!! Bye for now!!
Transform and Roll Out!!
Crossfire aka
Jaime
Transform and Roll Out!!
Crossfire aka
Jaime
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January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, that's not going to be easy to work out. How's Jazz going to explain himself to Ironhide?
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December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nicey, nice! Keep 'em comin' - the chapters, I mean. ;)
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November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, pretty good flow and 'plot' for a once shot smut fic. It is hard to read through all the run-on sentences though. I'd work on that a little more if I were you. You do show some raw talent, so don't take this to harshly. We're all here to improve...