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for Domestic Disturbance

by StarShineMB

schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, god this story is awesome. I can't help but love this story. Prime is so noble and Starscream is not what I would expect him to be...which makes it very cool.

person Trelynne
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Hearts fluttering around me* ~<333333 Another chapter i love dear~<333 Keep up the good work~~~~~~~~~
person Trely
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it~ i come on today and i get two chapters <333
Keep up the good work dear you have me craving more~ <333
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very good oh that was just so sweet and i love how you explained cybertronian mating lol
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally!!!!! I am glad they kissed and I look forward to the next chapter.
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that was well worth the wait, but what aplace to stop damn you!
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, you are doing such a good job. But the no lip thing...Prime has lips they showed them in the new movie so you could have gotten away with that. Thank you for a great story.
person Trely
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the story dear~ <3 Cant wait for more ^.^
person E
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far keep up the great work and post more please
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit that I like the two of them together. The battle of wits and cunning. And that was so cool that he couldn't get Prime and kill him because he saw concern. Great chapter can't wait to read more.