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August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Starscream. Leaving Optimus must have been the hardest thing he'd ever done. I hope this story has a happy ending.
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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm half going mad re-reading this until the next chapter!
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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ususlly I dont like Megatron/Starscream pairing. because abusive relationship between them. somehow I really like your story.
your writing really great.
very in charactors and believable.
Thanks for writing.
your writing really great.
very in charactors and believable.
Thanks for writing.
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July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can I just say, your writing is awesome. I didn't really read transformers fiction at all and yours just blew me out of the water. And you update so quickly! A trait thats truly rare these days. The only thing I can say is that I wished there was a tiny bit more about how Rachet took to the whole story and just how understanding he is. But other than that, it was an awesome chapter.
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July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Read the next chapter but you should know that you put it into the wrong story. YOu put it in you one shot Change. Might want to fix that. Love the story, look towards every new chapter.
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July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that Starscream told Prime. This story is brilliant and I do have to admit that I look forward to it very much. This story is written with such an emotion that even the traditional 'bad' bot is a figure that is someone you begin to care about. Thank you for a brilliant story and I look forward to more. This story is a delight to read.
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July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Another chapter! And bigger WOOT! Ratchet you are the best! Thankyou so much for the chapter! i am so happy! very very happy ^_^
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Curses in as many languages as i know!* Megatron i curse you! you jerk!! Grrr.. i just beg that Prime is smart when he gets to Starscream and finds the bloody thing, or the base scanners find it since it is admitting a signal and crush it! Anyway! Thank you so much for the chapter! It is very sad what happens to poor Screamy but hopefully this will help him get to Prime. Anyway again thankyou very much for the chapter! It was loved!
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't stop reading! This is great!
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh poor starscream, though i cant help but worry whats going t happend to skywarp and thundercracker without starscream there to protect them