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for Domestic Disturbance

by StarShineMB

schedule November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaay thank you for the new chapter! :D Hope to see more soon! ^_____^
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh why couldnt scrfeamer reach those nice sharp objects and detach megatrons voice atleast hehe

good chapter glad to see the updates rolling again ^^
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
....update?

Its been so long I almost forgot about this story!!!
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little unclear with the ending of this chapter was starscream laughing on the surgical table?
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heya!!
I am SOOOOOOOO sorry to hear about the dangerous situations you have been finding yourself in at work. That is absolutely horrid!! I will keep you in my prayers(if you don't mind)! Please be careful, though. I don't know you from Adam or Eve but I do not wish ill on anybody. Plus, on a purely selfish note, it would really suck to not know how this ends!
Take as much time as you need between chappies, hun! Don't over exert yerself on MY behalf, although I KNOW I am NOT the only one reading this. Make sure yer feeling as good as you can and take care of you!! Yer more important then the story any day!! Thanks for the update and it was really good!! I really look forward to the next chappie and as always keep up the excellent work!! Bye for now!!



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Jaime
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay for updates! Love hearing about the brothers too.

Sorry bout the hold-ups, I know those can be pretty scary! Hopefully they get caught soon!
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwww well, RL comes first :/ Good chapter, it's always great to see you updating this story. Can't wait for more! :D Takce care hun' and update asap ^___^
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your filler chapters are still damn entertaining and fit the story well so no worries.

Shitty about getting robbed. Thats enough stress to give you an ulcer. Buy a can of bear guard and keep it in your pocket. Not dog spray..Bear gaurd. It it potent stuff. I had to spray a dude trying to break into my house and it stopped him dead and disabled him till the cops came.
person Trelynne
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
TT___TT TC and Skywarp I LOVE YOU!! you both are wonderful seekers! Helping Starscream it is so loving and caring ^^ *hearts* anyway thank you thank you thank you for the chapter!! ^__^ i loved it very much!
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh they were so cruel to prime only to be enlightened by starscream beautiful this is yaoi fanfics at its best