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September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be one of the absolute BEST Optimus/Starscream stories that I have ever read. I just finished all thirty some odd chapters and all I can say is wow, just WOW. You're a brilliant writer. Plot, characterization, supense factor, all were just amazing. You did a fantastic job from beginning to end. Thank you so much for sharing your talent! I'm definitely bookmarking this story to read again. I can't wait to read more of your work.
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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So, I never review stuff. Like, ever. But this was sort of the fanfiction to end all fanfiction when it comes to TF, now. I enjoyed every second of this, and if a sequal ever crops up you can bet I'll read that too.
Seriously. This is brilliant. Thank you for writing it.
Seriously. This is brilliant. Thank you for writing it.
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February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Been watching this for a while. Awesome end. Are you going to do a sequel? I'd like to see what Optimus does to Megatron when he finds out just what Starscream traded his freedom for,
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January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The premise was interesting, and so was the fic, up until about chapter 21 or so, after which illogical situations started to crop up and the characters started making decisions for which the reasoning seemed senseless and designed solely to provide for drama and the lengthening of the story. Drama's all well and good, but so's logic. The fic was entertaining, but was quite jarring to have to go, "Huh? Wha?" every few paragraphs or so.
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January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I never was a big fan of transformers's fics, but this story has me converted, you can now consider me a fan. I loved everything about this story, EVERYTHING! And I seriously hope you decide to write a sequel.
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January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The end? Nooooooes! ;____; I loved this story! It was sooo good! I really hope you'll write many more awesome fics like that! :*
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December 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh pretty interesting story you've gor here. I really like how you described the relationship between Megatron and Starscream. I'd like to see more soon!
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December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this story is sooo, sooo good! I really love it! It's well written, interesting and the p0rn is awesome :D MORE!
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December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww it almost looks like everything is good and dandy between Megs and Starscream but..... we know better don't we :/ Good chapter, waiting for more ;3
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November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I really like this love/hate relationship between Megatron and Screamer. It's pretty sad that they ended this way :/