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Review for Mentors Part 1:

xD Oh wow, TC and Scream can be really whiny when they want to be. Who needs kids when you've got Seekers?

I like the clones that the terrible trio picked out, especially Scream's choice. Not only is Prowl made out of pure awesome (which he most certainly is) but you also gave Scream a legit reason for doing so. That, and Jag's personality is so distinctly different from Scream's (and TC's... and, hell, even Jester's for that matter) that it will be fun to see him interact (and try his very darndest to simply deal) with the more childlike and illogical minds of all the other clones. Something tells me that Jag is going to have a rough time adjusting to this unusual family.

Also, Jester will make a fine addition to the team. I adore Sideswipe, though I'm not sure if I could ever choose between him and Sunstreaker. Hmm... Jester has already expressed he likes the idea of being close to another clone, having a "brother" bond, so if he were to ever see a Sunstreaker clone would he experience memory echoes and fee drawn to that clone? The possibilities. Still, I'm more excited to see what kind of pranks he'll pull. I could totally see Jester do something he's not supposed to do, get caught, and try to weasel his way out of it with a fake act of innocence.

Sharon: "Jester, did you drink all the Dr. Pepper?"
Jester: *Surrounded by three empty bottles of Dr. Pepper* "...No."

And then there's Shado. I don't know as much about Mirage as I do some of the other Autobots; he just never really appealed to me; but I bet Shado will think twice before blindly obeying Speed again. xD Also, I'm curious to see how Speed will treat him. So far Speed has treated every clone he's met as inferior to him and has shown somw aggressive behavior in the way that he antagonizes everyone. I wonder if he'll be more patient with Shado for being his mentee or will that only make him even harder on Shado so that the Autobot clone will strive to be the best?

Can't wait to see how this all turns out.

Review for To Feel Human Part 9:

Three interesting developments have been made in this chapter. One, Megatron's new relationship with the people around him and his newfound sense of "freedom." Two, Scream's breakthrough as he can now openly seek out the touch of others. And, three, the most startling of all, the development of a spark inside of the clones.

If I got the general idea right, it takes a long amount of time for a spark to develop as a clone learns and grows with their appointed master. It seems as if eventually all clones will develop a spark given time but because of the strong bond between Sharon, Scream, and TC, the two clones developed their sparks early because of her concern for them. An interesting theory.

Good chapter; it made me consider things I hadn't really thought of before.

On another note, I think you mentioned something about how Scream hadn't had an overload derived from only pleasure for nearly two years. ...Which means that the Decepticon clones have been around for nearly two years if not a little longer. So, I'm guessing that the autobot clones will be created and released fairly soon.

Of course, now that I think about it, we haven't really gotten any input from the original Transformers since chapter one. There are a lot of things to consider; how much profit have they made, have they discovered that the humans found out about their Trojan horse and disabled it, how has relations bewteen humans and the Decepticons (as well as the Autobots) changed since the Decepticons released these clones, and what would any of the Transformers do if they ever discovered that the clones being sold to humans as slaves were truly sentient beings? The list could go on and on. I hadn't really considered the original Transforemrs for a while but as soon as the idea randomly popped into my head it has been fascinating me ever since.

Hmmm...

Somebody's gonna buy a Decepticon AND an Autobot to see what happens, aren't they? I can't begin to imagine what happens - their personalities adapt and change so much; they wouldn't necesserily pick a fight just because it's a Decepticon - only if their personalities clashed that way.

ah... Mentors is looking good. I'm especially interested in how the Jag/Scream relationship will go, but the Jester/TC one looks good too.

Oh, oh this is fun to read. So much fun. Oh that was hot. I feel all toasty inside...

Review for To Feel Human Part 8:

This was fun. xD Tyrone and Kim are a real hoot; they sort of remind me of the way all of my friends and I act when we get together. And Kim is a good sport, taking all of that abuse in stride.

Sharon's over-protective mother act was a nice touch; just like a father interrogating his daughter's prom date. xD And TC doesn't know what he's talking about; Scream makes a very lovely dyke. xD Heck, I'd go gay for "her."

I'm glad that Scream is getting closer and closer to overcoming his fear of being intimate with others. It'll take a long time to fully recover but he's getting there. And, while he may still not trust other people to touch his naughty bits, it seems he has no qualms against touching other peoples' parts. That boy's on his way to being a lean, mean, love-making machine. :3

Loved it! Can't wait for the next part.

Review for Adore Thy Master Part 3 (a and b):

Oh my! the Megatron clone is here already, hmm? And, as expected, Beast is as submissive as ever. Excellent. I like the big teddy bear type of bots. xD And the Overlord and Beast scene was fun; it didn't take those two too long to get properly acquainted. Now Overlord just needs to be properly introduced to his Master...

Admittedly, I wasn't much of a fan of the gore in part b but it was necessary to the plot so I'm not going to nitpick about it. And I'm excited to see what the Blitzwing clone is going to do; by the way, nice touch of having his Master be an expert in ice magic. Hmmm, the way Blitzwing reacted to his other personalities suggests that they haven't appeared before so that must mean that they had been dormant up until this point. And, Blitzwing himself couldn't be too new considering that he was around long enough for his master to create a life bond between them, or, at least I would imagine as such.

Very interesting developments... Can't wait to see where this is headed.

chapter 25 Rocknmuffin you are the best, that was so good, makes me smile love how you have that bit of humor in there. I so relate to that part were Maria was like Uh....size hehe.

This was very well written, and I'm very interested in doing a mini series due to this chap alone.^____^

Excluding the Insanity/Prototypes, I have read all of the Prototypes that are up, and I must say I absolutely love them. I think you've succeeded in making them all very real.

As for the Insanity and now Insanity/Prototypes, I'm sorry, but other than the small amount that I read, I will not be reading that particular mini series. As I assume you are trying to make sure your readers/fans (me = fan) are thouroughly horrified, I must say I very much doubt that you failed. To me, well, I can't read that level of abuse without feeling sick. However, from what I did read, it was well written, and please know that I am not trying to be rude or mean. I'm just letting you know why I will not be reviewing that particular series. Sorry.