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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
***Winner's Luck pt 2***
Hahahaha, Oh my! I can see Rumble and Frenzy doing that. Thats hilarious.
I'll have reviews for other chapters later. Wheee.
Hahahaha, Oh my! I can see Rumble and Frenzy doing that. Thats hilarious.
I'll have reviews for other chapters later. Wheee.
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know what the change is and have planned my plot for it, so my vote is a yes.
Sorry Chapter 3's taking so long, I'm really busy until around Mid-January. I'll try and get it out this weekend if I can, but I can't make any promises.
Sorry Chapter 3's taking so long, I'm really busy until around Mid-January. I'll try and get it out this weekend if I can, but I can't make any promises.
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes, someone is still reading, but what happen to Tron and why is Sharon hypocrite?
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
* yes, still reading * hehe.
Wow, with the holidays and what not I haven't had the time to catch up on reviews. So hear goes some.
**To Feel Human – Finality**
Tron looks like he has plans perhaps he'll turn up later, with his own renegade group, talking about fallowing in foot steps.
*** Market Competition part 1a**
Kidnapping a professor that was smart. Cute those lure Speed in with races awesome
**Market Competition part 1b**
HAHAHAHAH Autobots had to purchase TC a car! Love it! Underestimating humans... Tfs seem to do that a lot.
**Winner's Luck Part1**
I've had stupid pop-ups like that, nice concept.
**Mentors part 1**
Oh more clones to test, the more the merrier. Going to be fun to see how the Autobots act.
**Urban Shock Chapter 2: **
Looks of interesting concepts going on, very nice work.
oh wow more to come.
Wow, with the holidays and what not I haven't had the time to catch up on reviews. So hear goes some.
**To Feel Human – Finality**
Tron looks like he has plans perhaps he'll turn up later, with his own renegade group, talking about fallowing in foot steps.
*** Market Competition part 1a**
Kidnapping a professor that was smart. Cute those lure Speed in with races awesome
**Market Competition part 1b**
HAHAHAHAH Autobots had to purchase TC a car! Love it! Underestimating humans... Tfs seem to do that a lot.
**Winner's Luck Part1**
I've had stupid pop-ups like that, nice concept.
**Mentors part 1**
Oh more clones to test, the more the merrier. Going to be fun to see how the Autobots act.
**Urban Shock Chapter 2: **
Looks of interesting concepts going on, very nice work.
oh wow more to come.
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'm pretty sure people are reading... this story seems to have way more reviews then most get on this site.
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm reading it! And I have to say I'm beyond excited with these chapters. I find the clone/clone relationship very interesting considering that while there's been bonding between clones there's never been a full fledged relationship just between clones. And now I'm wondering about the clones' rights groups. I can't wait for the next chapter!
~Pax
~Pax
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No, No, that was not what I was talking about, in the fic she said she didn't want to reformat Scream because that was what made him, him but yet she and or her bother wanted to reformat Tron but wouldn't that make him him. So she's a hypocite.
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy--! They just sparkbonded!! YAY! That was an awesome and truly delicious chapter~
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January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm still reading and loving this fic. Please don't stop updating this is such an incredibly amazing fic!
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December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aliiive yay!
Nice tidbit about the siblings past there. I liked the dynamics and similarities of both encounters. Both clones allowed their masters brother/sister to comfort them and I found it highly touching as well as very cute.
TC's first flight was a real nice thing, especially as you made him detest his wings in the first part of the chapter. Also the fact that he can cook is very sweet. Yes, I think he is evolving quite well indeed :D
Cya
Den
Nice tidbit about the siblings past there. I liked the dynamics and similarities of both encounters. Both clones allowed their masters brother/sister to comfort them and I found it highly touching as well as very cute.
TC's first flight was a real nice thing, especially as you made him detest his wings in the first part of the chapter. Also the fact that he can cook is very sweet. Yes, I think he is evolving quite well indeed :D
Cya
Den