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**To Feel Human** - This is awesome! I'm typing up the first part to my story right now, and this already answered a lot of new questions I had already! :D

Dun dun dun, I will be writing something soon. Though it might be an alternate Transformers Animated future. X3 This is awesome btw. Great idea!

Wow this is good, makes me wonder why nobody thought to do it before. It also is making me wish someone would send me a Starscream clone right about now.

The two racing chapter were awesome. X3 Man, I hope to have the time to write one of these soon!

Heh, this is really creative. I like the idea of this story and would like to consider making an entry. I just have one question: what universde is this taking place in? I assume it's G1 because you mentioned Hook in the first chapter but I wasn't quite sure.

Regardless, this is a very cool idea and I think it'll be fun to write an entry for it. Now I just need to decide who I want a mini clone of...

One more question: will authors be able to submit more than one entry? Say, if someone gets a Decepticon first but then gets an Autobot later once they start selling them... Just curious.

*thinks* You know, this actually isn't a bad idea. I'd like to do a chapter for this when I have the time. It's kinda like an RP... only more sleazy than usual.

Only trouble is that my personal mech of choice is at the moment not a Decepticon. Oh, the hell with it. I'll just write one about one of the many thousands of Starscream-fuckers out there. Because you know damn well that seekers are hot even when they're assholes. Or think of something better. Please note that I'll be working with Animated personalities - so Swindle will be pulling his "I sound like a used car salesman" stuff.

Thank you for your answers; they were very helpful. While I've already got an idea and have started writing it, I think it's a good idea if you post an example chapter first. There are just so little mini things I'm not quite sure about and I don't want to write something that doesn't fit with your idea. Like, I've been wondering how much intelligence and free-will the droids will have. Would they be intelligent, would like act like a more well-behaved version of the character they were designed after, do they have any more purpose or function than simply being used as a sex object, do they have personalities or are they meant to follow orders? Things like that.

I'll continue to work on the entry I have planned, though I plan on waiting until I see an example before posting anything.

Review for Testing Phase:

I'm really glad you wrote this chapter because it answered a lot of questions I had about the droids, even ones I didn't address (like whether or not they came with an instruction manual). I really like it; it makes the characters seem more original and it gives the writers more freedom. Heh, funny thing; I was planning on doing my entry on Thundercracker. Great minds think alike, I guess. While I plan on doing someone else now (most likely G1 Skywarp) will authors be able to do repeats and use mechs that have already been used? I mean, I'm sure lots of girls would want to do Starscream. And if repeats are allowed then people won't have to rush in order to get a chance to do the character that they want.

Still, this was a fun chapter. Daniel was rather funny and Sharon was so nice. She seems very maternal; kind of reminds me of a nicer version of my mom. xD And I applaud you for using an older woman; just goes to show that you don't have to be barely legal to be sexy. Still, I love how you described TC the best. You made him so precious and adorable. Gosh, I wish these things were real.

Review for Learning:

You managed to make TC even more adorable in this chapter than in the last. He really is just like a school boy losing his virginity, which makes it kind of appropriate that his first partner is an older woman who knows what she's doing. I love how he's so child-like and free to learn, though, really, all of the droids should be like that (to an extent) at first. I really want to see more of these two together.

And I'm glad that Megatron's scheme was taken care of. While it had good potential for a story, I think it would've made this all a bit too thick with plot considering it's meant for people to contribute with their own robot-smut fantasy. And this way the mini decepticon clones and stay cute and cuddly forever. Teehee.

Man, I wish I had a robot boyfriend!