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HA! This is awesome, nearly genius, and it sparked my interest, my mech of choice though will be Soundwave, heheheehh Wave in this case.

Giving each on the abilities to learn is cool, can't wait till one really uses their special ability, TC might shock himself into reboot when that thunder rolls for the first time poor TC.

Most Excellent Stuff.

Review for To Feel Human:

I really like these new developments. The clones are so REAL. I love how they defy their programming and proove, as corny as it is, that "love conquers all" and all that Jazz. It's sweet. I must admit, I really like this side of your writing. You still have smut but this story is much more feel-good and fluffy than most of your other works that I'm used to.

I also like how you got the clones to think of their own needs too. I know that part two will be fun. xD

Review for The Tale of Kaon: PT 1:

Aha! Another Skywarp fan. I'm plmanning to use Skywarp too. I'd do another con but I'e already spent too much time on it to start over again.

Admittedly, this is a very neat idea you have. I like how you made this your own and stayed within the boundaries. This is a pretty neat little universe you have here. I do, however, have a few critiques. While your universe is interesting, it's very confusing. I honestly wasn't quite sure what was going on and why things were the way they were. If you could perhaps cleverly sneak in some background information in part two of your story that would probably help to clear things up.

Keep on writing! YOU CAN DO IT! xD

Review for To Feel Human Part 2:

Wow... This was... hot.

While gentle sex is my preference, I sort of like how Sharon dominated TC, made him the woman of the relationship. Using both ends of the double-sided dildo on him at te same time was very creative. xD Haha! Still, it's sort of odd to think of an older woman being this sexual but it's refreshing at the same time. Just because you're older doesn't mean you appreciate pleasure any less.

I really love how Sharon and Daniel treat TC and Speed like real people. Honestly, that's probably the greatest thing anybody could ever do for them.

And TC was so cute with how excited he got when Sharon said he was her boyfriend. I absolutely love im in this! You know what would be really cute? IF TC saved up some of his allowance money and bought Sharon a gift. I could see him do that. ("Don't boyfriends do these sorts of things for their girlfriends?")

I'm guessing the next part of your series will be Speed racer being the man in his relationship with Daniel. Looking forward to it.

ARDJKGBSDKJB! It won't let me obsessively edit 10 times like I normally do when I post a story! *spazes* *flails* *seizures* FFFFFFFFAIL. I already see like 3 things. MAN.

**To Feel Human pt 2** Cute little Thundercracker! I loved that you touched on the she/he subject. The way I normally write my 'fan universe' they are definite male and female separations. I look forward to writing your version of their gender in this universe though~

I actually have a character in my universe that has some gender issues, (in my universe, its not normal.) Is it alright if I use your two ports body form? Its for my 'Without You' story.

This is a very interesting concept. I like it very much. Ok so I have some questions is there any charecters that are off limits and do you have to share with another in your chapter of the story? How do I add if I have something, are you going to look over them or anything like that?

Alright, I am totally going to start one of these tomorrow night. I've reread the chapters and haven't really picked up a certain height of the robots. My question is, would a 6'2 human be a bit taller than a seeker clone? 8D

ARG! How did I miss that size info?! Thank you! And one more question, you said they were only Decepticons now, but if the story is like.. An Alternate Dimension of an Alternate Dimension in an Alternate Future... can their be some Autobot clone secondary characters, the details of there existence not being discussed?

Oh wells, will be writing in 8 hours! :D *little jig*

Review for Racing Partners parts 1 and 2:

First off, I just want to say that Speed racer is the greatest name to give to a transforming robot EVER. It made me giggle, at least.

You know, mini TC with a Swiss Army knife shouldn't be that cute. But... he just IS. I can't get over how adorable he is.

Daniel and his Drag Strip clone seem to get along pretty well. Still, when you ave two people together that are that competitive it's only a matter of time before their are hard feelings (especially when one loses against the other! xD) ALso, Danny's a slut but he's the best kind of slut.

Do these chapters take place some time inbetween chapters 2 and 3? I ask this because you mentioned something about Drag Strip having memory echoes and I thought that the clones were freed from not only the Trojan virus but their originals' memories as well.