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Yay for surprise Butt-smex! I'm glad Jag found someplace safe for him to call home, even if he might be annoyed from time to time by his "little brother". But then again, that's what younger siblings are for, right? I find the back story for Jag interesting, though I have to wonder how Scream is going to react when he realize that Jag has essentially moved on. I just hope he won't be in his funk for much longer.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Pax

Blurr and Megatron? He's the only mech I know who's huge and grey in animated. I like how you included Bumblebee in Blurr's memory echos.

I really like the take on the apocalyptic future, since you do have to wonder what exactly would happen to human society at the end of the world.
Pax

**Ghosts from the Past part 4**

Thanks for the shout out! Keke, Poor Dinobot. Since he can't pleasure himself he's going to need a mate now. :3 Interesting how all the histories intertwine.

Diiiiinooooooobottttttttt. Awesome. And now more bots! :D

...Wow. That was definitely some thing I was not expecting! lol Now all we need is Rampage and Depthcharge (since I refuse to believe that they died, especially if Rampage has Starscream's immortal spark and Depthcharge is just too cool) <3.

And that's exactly what the Scream needs! I'm sure Inferno will take good care of his "queen".

I'm afraid of what Inferno will do though when Jag learns that the Prowl clone upset Scream.

Can't wait to see more!
Pax

***Ghosts of the Past 1***

I'm going to go back and review previous chapters I haven't yet but for now I need to comment on this. OMG! Poor Jag and Scream. ;_; I like how this touches on how much they are their own bot compared to what they were cloned from. I have to take in account the Starscream info you gave in this chapter. X_X Poor Starscream clones, though that makes sense. ;_; I hope Jag and Scream get back together. X_X;;

I have to agree that Jag is definitely being an ass, but at the same time I can understand where he's coming from. It's hard to have your trust broken and if you know that he's going to break it again how can you go back?

I find the Prime/Starscream back story extremely interesting as I said before and am looking forward to further developments between the Charge/Scream/Doc pairing.

Can't wait to see more!
Pax

Oh wow...This is an extremely interesting plot twist! So now there are going to be full fledged Cybertronians amongst the ranks! This should be extremely interesting, especially for Rumble and Beachcomber.

And speaking of Rumble. Rawr! That was freaking hot! I really love the Clipper/Rumble pairing and am definitely looking forward to more of them in the future. I'm not surprised though that Spock didn't join in on Rumble, he's definitely too proud to do that lol. I am a bit worried as to how Jag is going to react though when he learns about Scream...

Looking forward to the next chapter!
Pax

Wow I got a lot to review here:

**New Era Part 7**
Rumble x Beachcomber is an interesting pairing, (even if its just for smex) Like how Scream and the others spied on it. XD

**New Era Part 8**
Yay Constructicons. :3 Poor Rumble man, he seems to be picked on no matter what side he joins. I like Spock's personality and the whole free of war commentary. ;-;

**New Era Part 9**
Petri is so cutttte. :3 The Petri, Stoner and Ashely family sounds so adorable when they have kids some day. The ScreamxJagxSandy was very good.

**New Era Part 10**
Nice acid rain science. Yay Wheeljack Clone! Hoping him and the Ratch clone hook up~

I'll review more later. I gotta head to work, derp.

I feel a bit uneasy about the memory flashes, and I'm extremely curious as to when that particular situation happened to Sunstreaker. Not to mention Sideswipe's reaction when he found out.

I really like Flame, his egotistical behavior is more endearing to me than anything. Confidence is definitely something the team can use right now, not to mention the beauty treatment. ;)

I do have to wonder about your ideas for Travis, since there does seem to be a bit of larger female population currently in the story and Torie was thinking about having children in an earlier chapter. I also wonder how that would impact the relationships between the women and their clones to have children.

Looking forward to the next chapter!
Pax