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Review for Trouble 3:

Oh my; this is probably one of the darkest story arcs of the Market Commodity universe, perhaps even more so than the Insanity Arc in the original Market Commodity.

Also, I’m still trying to decide whether or not Keke terrifies me or makes me happy. And Poet is just plain adorable. Makes it hard to imagine how many people hold an irrational hate for Wheelie when you see this adorable clone of him.

Oh God, the punishment. xD Why do I find this so hot? Then again, Inferno is my favorite Beast Wars character (rivaled only by Blackarachnia in my mind). Personally, I think he’s hot. xD I guess blind, stupid loyalty is just a turn on for me; that’s why I like Cyclonus anyway. >.> Haha! I don’t know what those mechs are complaining about; I’d fuck Inferno in a heat-beat. Lol. Glad to see the fire ant is getting some attention. ^_~

I do agree with Pax though on the issue she brought up. While we may feel that it is righteous and deserved, the thought of a group of adults discussing a punishment for rapists and coming up with what they did seems rather… innappropriate? I can’t really think of the right word. It’s like trying to put out a fire with another fire.

I still think the punishment is fun though, but that’s due to my unhealthy love for Inferno. Perhaps, while the clones are going through this punishment, you could have some of the other characters mentioning what Pax said. With such an odd punishment system, there must be some people who question how it works and if what they’re doing is really right.

…I still love this story. :D Just think Pax brought up a really good point.

*Molests Inferno* >:3

I’m not sure if I’ve even reviewed a single chapter for this story and that makes me sad. I think this is another interesting world you’ve created and I’m glad to be reading about it. Very glad. I’d go into detail about all the wonderful things in this story but that would take up 3 pages of reviews (at least) and 3 hours of my time. Instead, I’ll just review the most recent chapters.

I’m very mad at Jester and Bond. Bond is a thug and doesn’t know any better yet but Jester has been around long enough to know not to pull that shit. You’d think living with Scream would be enough to convince a guy that RAPE is BAD but I guess Sideswipe clones are just prone to be slow. >.> Flame, well, I guess he’s just a slut. Lol. Seriously though, those guys are on my naughty list and getting coal for Christmas.

Oh, God, Keke… I don’t know whether I like him or whether I’m afraid of him. xD

And Scream and TC are preggers! D’awww! They gonna’ have wittle beastie babies!

Also, can I tell you how happy I am that you brought in elements from Beast Wars? I grew up with that show as a child and loved it even before I realized it was a part of the Transformers franchise. Dinobot’s snarls and growls in the middle of his speech make me giggle. And… could I request that Inferno gets some action from one of the girls? I don’t really care who; I just want ant-man to get some love. He’s my favorite character ever. :3 Yes, I know, I’m a freak.

Wow, touching scene about the babies might not make it. :C I'm sure they will though, ;-; I hope! Leads me to say Vishal was 'born' before the disaster of course. I still don't know if he's a small child or a young teen at this time though. X_X;;;

I think a good punishment for Bond would be... seeing if there is some way to put the pleasure programs in overdrive, and actually have him in a 'heat' of sorts, but with everyone denying hims release. XD I'm mean. :3 To make things worse, he doesn't know it, but self gratification will only put the programs in overdrive more. :3 Kekeke.

I second ToonQueen's idea. >:D

**NEW START***

Oh lawd this is awesome. Nice to see that Scream is getting better. ;_; Though I hoped he'd get back with Jag. I'm really picky about my mpreg. You explained it awesome with SCIENCE. :3 I wish my chars Vishal and Kaon could have kids. ;-; Well actually they COULD. Vishal just has to get off his bum arse and build one. Durp.

***Trouble 1***

I was wondering when the three pranksters would work together. X3 kekek, very good! Actually the only complaint I have about Transformers Animated is their Skywarp isn't a prankster... yet. Maybe he'll get over his shyness and start warping to shove people down stairs. Poor Mirage clone. ;_;

I rather like your take on Bond. If Skywarp has showed us one thing it's that he's not cute and cuddly so I think your characterization is completely justified. Though I do wonder how exactly Sharon is going to react to this sudden development...

And yay, Poet! It's good to see that his recovery is proceeding.

Interesting use of KeKe by the way.

*cheers*

That. Was. Adorable! Poor Storm! *huggles* Flame will fix it and make it all better!

I was wondering how you would address the declining human population, especially since clones are very possessive of their owners. And it's about time that Sharon backed off. I think there's been enough "do as I say, not as I do" even if I do understand that she just wants to protect Torie. Just a bit too hypocritical for my tastes though.

I enjoy the play between the four. They make a fun group.

Huh, that was a weird twist. I can certainly say I wasn't expecting the Neanderthal twist. Just as an anthropology major there are a few flaws I find in that theory >< I'll suspend disbelief though. But just for you ;)

I'd like to see more Storm/Torie/Flame/Jester though