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April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I was wondering what had happened to Tron--er, I mean Megatron… PLEASE DON’T HIT ME!!! Dx Lol. And it looks like he’s been a busy little mech. Little fragger needs a stress ball or something.
Aww, poor widdle Opie. (Though, admittedly, I laughed when I first read the name because it immediately made me think of the Andy Griffith Show and now the theme song is stuck in my head.) I do not envy that little Optimus clone at all. Makes me wonder when Tron--MEGATRON, DON’T HURT ME—went from believing he and other clones to be sentient beings to believing (to an extent) that they were the originals, or at least close enough to the originals that he associates every clone with the personalities and actions of the mechs they were cloned from.
I wonder, whatever happened to his pet human? Unfortunately, her name eludes me; it’s been a long time since I’ve read that chapter. Did she die with the rest of the miserable flesh creatures or does he have her hidden somewhere (because, disgusting creature that she is, she still belongs to him).
The first person point of view was a fun change of pace. Personally, I prefer third person point of view because when people write in first person they tend to be more likely to tell the readers what they think and why they do what they do rather than allow the readers to find out for themselves but first person also tends to give more insight than third person can manage. It’s hard to pick. Still, I think you pulled it off pretty well.
Nicely done. Can’t wait to see more of your writing.
Aww, poor widdle Opie. (Though, admittedly, I laughed when I first read the name because it immediately made me think of the Andy Griffith Show and now the theme song is stuck in my head.) I do not envy that little Optimus clone at all. Makes me wonder when Tron--MEGATRON, DON’T HURT ME—went from believing he and other clones to be sentient beings to believing (to an extent) that they were the originals, or at least close enough to the originals that he associates every clone with the personalities and actions of the mechs they were cloned from.
I wonder, whatever happened to his pet human? Unfortunately, her name eludes me; it’s been a long time since I’ve read that chapter. Did she die with the rest of the miserable flesh creatures or does he have her hidden somewhere (because, disgusting creature that she is, she still belongs to him).
The first person point of view was a fun change of pace. Personally, I prefer third person point of view because when people write in first person they tend to be more likely to tell the readers what they think and why they do what they do rather than allow the readers to find out for themselves but first person also tends to give more insight than third person can manage. It’s hard to pick. Still, I think you pulled it off pretty well.
Nicely done. Can’t wait to see more of your writing.
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April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...I didn't see anything out of the ordinary...I'll have to go back and look for it.
Personally I really like 3rd person, but I did like the way you did 1st person. Poor Opie...*huggles Orion* I don't like the thought of Optimus Prime clones being abused though. Might be a personal bias. ;)
All in all though I thought it was really good.
Personally I really like 3rd person, but I did like the way you did 1st person. Poor Opie...*huggles Orion* I don't like the thought of Optimus Prime clones being abused though. Might be a personal bias. ;)
All in all though I thought it was really good.