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by bittereloquence

schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Grrrrrr I hate you! No - I hisssssttttt love you! Your torturously delicious wondrous creations have become a horrifyingly addictive destraction in just one breem.

Grrrrr I must rip my attention from this site as a temporary restorative function. To recover my own sanity and TF reality sequences that your overpowering plot dimensions have so thoroughly shattered.

Love the story. (And maybe now I'll quit thinking like Dinobot)
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Soundwave. He kind of reminded me of a submissive housewife married to a wife beater, only he doesn't delude himself with thoughts of "he hits me 'cause he loves me."

Nice use of Soundwave's alt-mode during the naughty bits. In my life, I've only seen few Transformers smut scenes that used mechs in their alt-modes and this is definitely the first time I've seen Soundwave be the one to do it. And I liked how you portrayed the relationship between Soundwave and Megatron; it's always nice to see other people's interpretations.

Also, the Soundwave and cassette fluff at the end made my day. I'm such a sucker for family fluff.

Nicely done. Keep on writing, partner. ;)