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December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh I love this story! Could have used a bit of editing, but overall it's good.
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pretty well written, though you mixed up a few similar sounding words. I've got to wonder - if she was in heat, does this mean she's carrying his offspring now?
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Arcee doesn't have much self-restraint, does she?
And you could do with corrected a whole load of words.
And you could do with corrected a whole load of words.