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for Do Me Right

by hoppersnail

schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very awesome! Oh man, the twins! XD I love how you wrote the frustration. XD
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't believe no one has left a review yet. Though there were some typos, it was fairly well-written. And not only did I feel for the poor mech every time his 'overload' slipped away - I laughed my ass off as well!