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for Blue Alert

by Kettle

person Kya
schedule February 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good sweet gods YES. That was so damn hot!
person aniay
schedule February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH FUCK!

I don't have enough words in my vocabluary to say how hot your stories are. All of them Decepticon and Autobot ones. GUH. Really I enjoy your fics so much, the fact that you don't use the typical spike/valve stuff, that you make mechs fully mechs and not heraphrodites as we usualy do.

I love the sticky being so very Sticky... Oh I wish I found this stories earlier... mind if I rec them to some friends of mine?
person DarkSirocco
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
kettle, i've read this story at least a dozen times now, and it gets better every time. well-written, this glimpse into Red and Inferno is also humerous, erotic, sweet and beautiful. -Siro
person EerieIri
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was sexy and yummy, and I really hope you do more stories with Red Alert in them!^____^
person The Giant Fapping Fangirl of Doom
schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh frag. Red topping.

*can noaw die happily*
person Viv
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is brilliant in so many ways! :D
person Jookami
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* Whew! That was hot! Thank you for giving us some Red/Inferno loving that was sticky, but remembered they _are_ giant robots that have engines and sensors and whatnot! *noms* I was rather hoping as I read the fic that Inferno would have the chance to 'start a fire' with Red. ^__^
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was /fantastic/! I don't think I've ever laughed so hard at an adult story before! You mixed the right amount of silliness with the right amount of sex, and got the characterization perfect to a 'T'! It seemed very in-tune to the humor of some of the concepts you presented.

Anyway, great job! I hope you continue writing! I love how you're willing to draw human analogies to the confusing concept of robot sex. Some might call it uncreative--but I think, in your writing, it works out really well because your so open with it (sometimes people get /too/ caught up in theories and technical mumbo-jumbo and the story loses its sexiness--but you retain it well).

Good story; keep up the good work!
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Werll... masturbation fics aren't really my thang... but it was still pretty good anyway. Didn't get me turned on or anything, but yeah, it was still good.