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OMG I love this story, you captured their characteristics perfectly and it's beautifully written, so poetic that once I started I couldn't stop.

Now I have a confession to make I read this aug 28th last yr and made a pic for you because I found it so inspiring
tried to send it to ur email account only to find out it didn't work any more so if u get to read this comment please take a look here :D http://idigoddpairings.deviantart.com/art/Megatron-and-starscream-63592716

I've read this and reread this multiple times over the last several months. I've searched out your works on your personal site and in other archives. I'm never disappointed. The files here are largely corrupted, but I've been making do for your flawless Megatron/Starscream dynamic. I could list the shining attributes of your writing for an hour and probably not cover every aspect that has garnered my attention. I firmly admire your forays into highly literate prose. Your use of language, your inventiveness, the attention to detail, the seemingly innate knowledge of cause-and-effect, the unabashed poetic imagery in your writing, not to mention the accuracy of your characterizations; all of this and more mark you as one of the best amateur writers I've come across on the internet. I salute your works and hopefully I can get off my lazy ass and review them properly one day.

Bloody hell!! I love it!!!!

I read this a long time ago and felt very very impressed... Years later, I come across it once again and I'm left speechles. Transformer sex is a vey... particulat topic, to say the least. I had wondered how you were going to pull off a fic of this type; there have been many that have tried. And many that have failed. But you did an awsome job here.
Fans, when writting an erotic/sex transformer fanfic, go and treat the characters as if they were humans and the result is never realistic. Transformers are not human, neither is their biology nor their way of thinking...
But your fic is different. You've kept the characters completly IN character, you've played with their personalities, and have given to what could have perfectly been a mere porny-fic, a very deep and thought-provoking development.
You made their 'sex' realistic, and I must congrtulate you for using those latin/greek words instead of more 'human' terms, which, I'm afraid, would clash.
All in all, this is one of the very best transformer's fanfiction I've evre read and surprinsingly original and well written.
Awesome job!

Hehehe, me again... I meant to leave my e-mail since I always leave signed reviews (even when 'flaiming'), so, here it is: lacerta3@hotmail.com. Feel free to write me whenever you want. :)

MAAAAGNIFFICENT.

Wow, just wow! It is really hard to find good Transformer stories. This one is absolutely breathtaking!--The dialog between the two of them was wonderful. To their touching of each other! Wonderful job on this!

Lord. xD Half of that I didn't uderstand. Greek and Latin wors? Nice story though. ^^ It's cool to see someone using something new in their stories.

Screw you bryan. For someone to use so many crude curse words not to mention have so many errors in their comment must be stupid. o_o If you hate the story so much, why the hell are you reading it? That just shows how much of a life you have. xD

My actual review { Lovely story hun. I admire your use of language in this. ^^ Keep at it. <3 Bryan, you can piss off }

sorry for lack of name in my first message. ^^;