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for Becoming Mama Bear

by Breech_Loader

schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay they got to safety! :D Can't wait to read more~
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Poor Bee! Very awesome story!
person Flarey
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story, i like it... and yes, people ARE reading this... unless you count me as a nobody ^^;

anywhoo... update as soon as possible, i'd love to read more :)
person Anon
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Hurry and fix this disclaimer thingy! I want to read!
person Anon
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw HELL no! You CANNOT stop here!!! NEXT CHAPTER!
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry. I've been reading, but I've been busy so no time to review. But I am now! YAY! He's repaired! And blood red? Can't quite pictureit, but I'm trying. Does he have red optics now, too? When is it gonna get to the Bee/Hotwire stuff? Poor Wheeljack. Whatever happened to him after Hook got him? And what's Starscream gonna do to the sweet little Bumblebee now? New chapter's coming next week right? I can't wait!
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes I am reading this story lol. Its really good i loved the part when Hotwire said "Next, Yes i accept the fricking terms and conditions." That really got me laughing good job. Excellent work keep it up
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Bumblebee... and I just love how you torture him -,-;
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story to start off with. Wish you could continue with the CadexBee fanfics and not take them down. I am interested in seeing a WaspxBumblebee TFA one. Keep up the good work. :)
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. I like it. I can't wait to read your next chapter, but I wish you didn't take down 'You Lost'. Would you please consider posting it back up? If your co-author dropped off the face of the Earth, maybe I can help or something. Just please don't take that fic away, it was one of my favorites of yours. Speaking of, when are you going to update 'Already Broken' and that fic where Barricade has a sparkling. Do we ever get to find out who the other father is? Update ASAP!