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Poor Hotwire! Poor confuzzled Prowl! Post soon! I must know what happens next! X3

*checks every day for a revier*

Poor Prowl; one can only imagine how confused he must be. D:

Still... It was really hot (and kind of cute) how he reacted to Hotwire’s attentions. He seemed so starved for affection. Then again, being among the Decepticons is probably an emotionally crippling experience even if you ARE one.

Poor Hotwire too. This couple certainly has a lot going against them.

Nicely done. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

My favorite part of the chapter: when Ramjet shouted "I don't hate Starscream!" Oh Starscream, you've got a personality that even YOU couldn't love.

Poor Prowl. D: I don't want him to become a Decepticon. He's not enough of an asshole to be one! Lol. Still, you got to give a guy credit; not once did he given in during the torture, nor did he lose his faith in Hotwire. Too bad that now all his memories of the others have been deleted. Just a quick question; are his memories permanently deleted or did Starscream put them on a back up file so that he could use what knowledge Prowl had to his advantage?

Oooooh~ Muffin! *Munch munch*

Nice chapter. Glad to see Bumblebee has finally realized his mistake, but, as usual, it's too late. Lol. Gosh, poor Prowl. Not only has he been betrayed by a friend and captured by the Decepticons, he's also had his secret past revealed to the whole world. Luckilly Prime is such a stand-up guy. I love him in this fic. :3

HURRY UP AUTOBOTS! YOU GOTS TO SAVE PROWLER! D: Lol.

Hmm, Prowl originally being manufactured as a Decepticon, eh? Nice twist there. I have to say, my favorite line; "Fuck me like a Decepticon." If I ever get a boyfriend who's as geeky as me, I'm going to use that line and just hope he doesn't stick an electric toothbrush up my ass. Poor Bumblebee; there's little out there that is more emotionally scarring then hearing your "parents" making the beast with two backs.

Also, you made me officially hate Oil-slick. xD Hooray for fan-based prejudice! :D

Understood! And thank you for finally to my many requests. To be honest, I thought you would've yelled at me to quit asking or something. I'm very excited to hear about the new chapter of the rewrite, but I'm also kinda nostalgic. If you have it, can you please email me the old version? I just loved the last 3-4 chapters of the original 'You Lost' and would love to read them again. Prowl and Hotwire are so hot together. And typical Decepticons would rather live dishonorably than die honorably. Can't wait for chapter 23! Update ASAP!

Love ur story. Wish I could write like u. Well .................. Sorry realy bad at putting thoughts down.

This is /easily/ my favorite Transformers fanfic. It's just... awesome. So much fun to read, and so well written. ^^ You guys need to update more often! Like... every day.

Hi! I just wanted to let you know I'm working on trying to make a list of everyone's fancharacters, and I was wondering if you'd like to add yours? It's partially so people don't accidentally use other people's fancharacter names and get into arguments and stuff. I've seen some pretty bad slag-slinging over it. Anyway, the "Ultimate Fancharacter List" is a livejournal community, which can be found at: http://community.livejoournal.com/tf_fancharnames
I also have a section for it on my site, TransfanCentral.com.
By the way, interesting story! I've never read anything quite like this before. I hope you update soon. I'll be waiting to read more when you do. :-)

I loved this chapter. I think you did a wonderful job portraying how wonderful it feels when you find someone you think that can understand you, and how vulnerable you become when you realize that you are almost willing to reveal your darkest secrets to them. It's a scary step to take, especially when you've been alone nearly all your life, but once you finally open up it becomes a little easier, a little less painful...

I understand Bumblebee's jealousy entirely. He's not jealous of the potential relationship between Hotwire and Prowl; he's jealous of the attention that Prowl would receive because of that relationship. Poor Bee; what a drama queen. Lol. Just kidding. His reaction was realistic considering he hasn't had the time to stop and actually think about what has just happened yet.

I like the idea of Hotwire and Blackarachnia having a past, unsuccessful relationship. It's interesting and is something that has yet to be explored. Go with it. Perhaps even go farther with this relationship in your story about Hotwire's background. I really want to know what happened between these two and see at just what point did Hotwire realize that her definition of "anything" was different from Blackarachnia's. It makes me wonder if Blackarachnia did something to betray what trust Hotwire might have had in her. I want to know; my curiosity has been piqued.