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for Becoming Mama Bear

by Breech_Loader

schedule January 31, 2025 at 12:00 AM

Darling, I absolutely need an ending. I am hopelessly hooked. You did a very great job at describing the feelings of all parties involved, so much I could feel the need, the hunger, the resentment. I could almost feel the pain and the fear. Absolutely amazing dearie! 

schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, suspenseful! Good to see you and the fic haven't died or anything. But speaking of half dead fics, when are you going to update 'Pain Without Limits', 'You Lost', 'Already Broken', and 'Drive-By Download'?
person subby
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
it good but disturbing
person SS13
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww, such a sweet moment.
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this fic, and can not wait for the next ^ ^
person Anon
schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is the second time Hotwire was refered to as Breech. I cant remember what the other capter was. Did that use to be her name?
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if you go further Becoming Mama Bear, I really loved this fic ^ ^
person GabrielC
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I have just spent my entire sunday reading this from start to finish for the first time!!! It's really good. I like Hotwire very nice new character and you have all of the others' personalities excellently. I have thoroughly enjoyed it. I was really sad what the 'cons did to Prowl though :( Will they find out he can't stay undercover he's Prowl! Please update soon... I MUST know what happens... :P...
person tanisa
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this fic, I look forward update soon ^ ^ (sorry for my bad English)
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! OMG!! OMG!! I have been waiting FOREVER for an update on this story! I am dying to know what happens to Hotwire and Barricade/Prowl!! You can NOT leave a femme hangin', can ya?? I really like this story. I read it a month or two ago and hoped you were gonna finish it!! Please let me know if my hopes are in vein!! Keep up the good work and bye for now!!

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Cross_fire1205 aka
Jaime