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for Odd Couple

by DeeDaday

person Bex
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was getting a little worried. Sure it was supposed to be corny but...I knew something had to happen. Plus...I've seen the pic, but even then I started to doubt myself. Porny and corny and wonderful as always XD
I love the characterisation of them both, especially the fact that pornstar Lockdown is pretty much the same as everyday Lockdown.... <3

PS: Dear Enolianslave,
Thank you for making a respectable person a little less respectable. Also, I saw the picture that inspired or was inspired by this. Great stuff XD

*goes back to Odd Couple at ffnet....*
person catc10
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG!!! *fits of hysterical laughter*
Can we get the tail end of this fantasy played out in fic-proper (if this leg of the fic can be considered fic-proper?)
I LOVE YOU.
ME
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my that was hot. :3 X+X I went back and forth with seeing them in their human forms and in their bot forms. Sexy either way~
person dolose
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Eeeee! So glad I stumbled on this.
person Evil Killer Poptarts
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Like I said in the pit of voles, DEAR SWEET NINJA PRIMUS. I've read this like three times now and it's still completely overwhelmingly hot and amazing. You have the most amazing way with words, and your storytelling is impeccable. I loved the way you balance what the characters are thinking- or a complete inability to think- with what they're doing, and weave it all into something hot and gritty and satisfying. Mmm, I love your work, but this is by far the most gripping chapter yet!
person Neko234
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just had to say that this was completely and utterly FANTASTIC! Plus I'll be looking forward to more chapters on here and on ff.net. Thank you for being awesome!
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*stares* Wow, that was awsome. I need to go read the rest of that fic now.