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September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
... Ok, lemme get my jaw off the ground here ::fumbles:: ok, i'm good XD
I'm just blown away. Seriously, that was awkward and fumbling and Prowl was such an adorable little virgin, but it was still so well written. And so well worth the wait of work. XD I'm going to be good and not read the rest of these chapters until I get further into the bulk of the story, but just wanted to say wow. So very glad I'm old enough to read on this site ^_^
I'm just blown away. Seriously, that was awkward and fumbling and Prowl was such an adorable little virgin, but it was still so well written. And so well worth the wait of work. XD I'm going to be good and not read the rest of these chapters until I get further into the bulk of the story, but just wanted to say wow. So very glad I'm old enough to read on this site ^_^
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September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You wanted to know how many face-palms I did right? Well the number was zero. That's because I was too busy wiping my keyboard from the nosebleeds while I was still burning my way through the story. Not bad plot but more like: Plot? What Plot?. Which is no problem for me. All I have to say is this: GOOD JOB! *thumbs up as a new wave of blood made it's way down my nose, again*
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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Did I tell you how much I adore the latest chapter? Because I totally do. Especially how Prowl hits poor oblivious sleeping Lockdown and tells him it's all his fault. XD That was PRICELESS!
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August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The hell -- Prowl, you are so messed up. I don't even blame Eno or Dem for this one, or even Lockdown. You can't create this kind of ridiculousness. It just exists. You are SO. MESSED. UP.
And I love it. To bits and pieces. LOVE it. It makes me giggle and squirm in happiness, even as I face-palm myself repeatedly. (Last count was, I believe, eight.)
And I love it. To bits and pieces. LOVE it. It makes me giggle and squirm in happiness, even as I face-palm myself repeatedly. (Last count was, I believe, eight.)
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August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwww you don't know how disappointed I am that that was just a dream ;_;
It was niiice though. I love conniving-slut!Prowl much, much more than uptight-virginal!Prowl XD
It was niiice though. I love conniving-slut!Prowl much, much more than uptight-virginal!Prowl XD
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August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just thought you should know, I've currently been eyeing this chapter for a good ten minutes.
I'm still nottttt so sure I want to read it.
...I probably will, anyway. I always do. :C
I'm still nottttt so sure I want to read it.
...I probably will, anyway. I always do. :C
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August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Prowl sure does have some interesting dreams.
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August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I only face!palmed once. But it was a good one, I promise.
Also, I don't mind that enoxx forcibly deposited this in your brain. If I could, I would forcibly deposit stuff too, but I'm not that awesome.
Great job!
(Off to read the new ffn chappie, now.)
ME
Also, I don't mind that enoxx forcibly deposited this in your brain. If I could, I would forcibly deposit stuff too, but I'm not that awesome.
Great job!
(Off to read the new ffn chappie, now.)
ME
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August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh... oh GOD. *iz ded from laughter* I'm just as torn as Lockdown on this one. While the sex is INCREDIBLY yummy, Prowl mind-fuckery my just be one of my new favorite hobbies. WHY DO YOU MAKE IT SO FUN TO TORMENT YOU, PROWL?
P.S. What would I have to bribe Eno dearest with to get her to draw a picture of hysterical!angry!Prowl in his undies and socks, complete with the I've-just-tried-to-rip-my-hair-out 'fro?
P.P.S. PROWL HAS A HAIR DRYER. GOD, JUST ADMIT YOU'RE GAY ALREADY.
P.S. What would I have to bribe Eno dearest with to get her to draw a picture of hysterical!angry!Prowl in his undies and socks, complete with the I've-just-tried-to-rip-my-hair-out 'fro?
P.P.S. PROWL HAS A HAIR DRYER. GOD, JUST ADMIT YOU'RE GAY ALREADY.
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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD there will one day be that sort of mind-blowing sex for realz...I'm sure. Prowl will learn one day!
ME
PS: reCaptcha says "19 behave", coincidence? I think NOT.
ME
PS: reCaptcha says "19 behave", coincidence? I think NOT.