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for Nevermore

by AngelofTwilight

schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When will we see more BBxMoonchaser loving? Or BumblebeexAnyone loving? And welcome back! Update ASAP!
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg good! I like the angle of Bee not remembering. ;_; Poor Moonchaser!
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First off since when is Red Alert a girl? That's kind of weird and a little confusing as to why you changed 'his' gender. I didn't really see a point to that. But hey it's your story you can do what you want, although I would appreciate an explanation cuase really I'm dumbfounded.

Flashback was very effective, you tied up those loose ends effectively. Good job I'm anxiously awaiting chapter 20

~NetherOnyx
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah, ignore Harley! There fic, to me, is to violent and random -_- I think yours is much cuter.
I'm excited for the next chapter ^^
person dino1
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. I wonder how happy everyone will be when they figure out the age that Moonchaser bonded to Bee. I also wonder when the 'bots find ot why Megatron is after Bee will he be too valuable to put into combat. I can't wait for update!
person Withc08
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a surprise. Although a good one, so update soon!
person llyoung
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful twist for your story. Thanks for the update.
person llyoung
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Moonchaser. Thanks for the update.
person Witch08
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg! This is getting intense! Can't wait for the next chapter, so update soon!
person Pretty_Pessimist
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Your a fantastic writer and you came up with an awesome idea to write about! Good job and please update as soon as you can!
~PP.