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The Seekers may be coarse, but you can't deny that they have good taste. Sunny's pranks seem to be focused on denting Prowl. Jealously maybe?

*chuckles*
i am liking this more and more as i read. and seriously, i want to piece all the parts together, but, since i don't have the time to keep up with ANY of the episodes for either sighted series, i get to chuckle and make pieces fit as you write. and since you're providing enough details for me to work with, that's a great thing. thanks.

now, for the insane mind to wonder how you work in smut, and 'bots... though i will quietly wait until you get there.... lol.

Sincerely waiting for the next chapter, Shadow Wolf

OOOOHhhhhh, I just found this story and I really like it. I like how you have the two Prowls...that is so cool. Thank you for a great read and I look forward to more.

Prowl and Optimus huh? I never thought about that pairing before. I usually put Prowl with Jazz, Bumblebee, or Lockdown.

That was awesome! Please update soon! I'm dying to read what'll hapens next!

This is really good. Prowl from TFA getting sucked into the G1 world. Cool. I hope you add more to this.

Interesting concept and your writing has improved. But you still need to grammar check a few more times before publishing. There's some dialogue which doesn't have the ending "" to differentiate it between non-dialogue, and a few mispelling's. But all-in-all, you're much improved!

It's a start... *scratches head* since i'm not utterly familiar with Transformers beyond the newer stuff, can you refresh my brain over which series you're overlapping? Please? just so i can ask my hubby questions if I get lost, cause he knows all the old stuff....

Though i'm waiting to see what you do to starscream, i always wanted to slice that one in turn him into scrap. ^^