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This was good, but just a little short. And Young Optimus seemed way more confident than he usually does. I thought he'd be on bottom. Just saying.

*snort* Tease, that you really are. UM comes with the message he will visit Earth, then wants to know where Optimus is - and it just has to Bumbleebee being the only available one in the moment. I'm curious if he will wind himself out of this or if not, how UM is going to react knowing Optimus went through a portal to another DIMENSION. I hope he won't visit G1, too, because the story's about Optimus and Prowl.
Besides, the Seekers will pop up somewhen (will they react similarly to Optimus as they did to Prowl?) and you mentioned stasis-cuffs in the next chapter (hinted: with Prowl). You have made me giddy for the next update. XD
Oh, not to forget - "YouenteredmeintoyoursecuritysystemasZippy?” XD, poor, poor Blurr.

What I didn't like as much was how little detail was about the bots' reactions to young Optimus. Okay, many of them came to see him, making it look like to him he was some sort of attraction. But I miss the single, great wonder, surprise, curiousity expressed because he's their very Prime's counterpart and only that they all came tells of this.

Optimus is a little bit snarking again - he's not as innoncent as first shown in the show and you perfectly caught that. I laughed so hard in "Decepticon Air" when he grumbled his way down the ventilation shaft (and how he cunned the Decepticons - at spark, he has just the right amount of evil XD). How do you think the others would have reacted seeing AND hearing him like this? -.^ This just showed he's a complexer character than many thought and gave him credit before.

Beast Wars - Silverbolt and BlackArachnia do make a cute couple. I can't wait for the next chapter. Stasis cuffs huh?

I didn't like Optimus' entrance as much as Prowl's, probably because I knew what would happen. Or maybe I missed the Seekers again commenting on a new bot, because they're bound to notice, aren't they? Will you maybe include this later? The chapters are also too short, in my opinion- you get only tidbits and then you'll wait two weeks on hot coals for the next. Okay, then I'm used to reading long chapters, so it's only a very subjective view.

*snickers* Prowl's reaction to young Optimus was amusing - one self-sacrifing glitch is already enough, and he seems to be used to when "an" Optimus dishes out the dry humour.

Cute! More please ^_^ I loved the latest chapter~ Hehe you can really see the diffraction in sparks with the two Primes.

Hey, you should have G1 Prowl interface with Young Optimus. It would only be fair.

I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU USED THAT STARSCREAM REFERANCE! ugh as a die hard starscream fan the actual voice actor of starscream in animated already pisses me off enough but to read it used by a fellow fanfic writter *shakes head*

Young Optimus is too curious for his own good. But meeting Prime should help his self-esteem. Has anyone else noticed that it's a little on the low side?

SWEET!! This is an excellent fic! Just the plot itself is awesome! Kudos to you!

Great chapter! I can't wait to see how Opitmus reacts to G1!